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by godsprincessOswego, New York, USAJul 201775 comments

I'M INVISIBLE

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I’M INVISIBLE

I’m invisible to others it seems
Drifting along as though in a dream
A dream where others can’t see me
But I can see them through the screen

Wandering about here and there
No one seeing me or seeming to care
Wondering if there is more to this in life
Like a puzzle piece not fitting quite right

Feeling at times like the Unicorn that missed the Ark
Never finding that missing puzzle part
Trying to fit in but not being heard
Eventually giving up and not saying a word

My voice is in a frequency no one can hear
Along with my body in a time warped mirror
So putting my Invisible Cloak on for another day
Going out in the world to try to find my way
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2017
About this poem:
More and more feeling this way. Things in my life lately

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niah9
Oh Kathy....when I have felt this way, I have usually dressed in my brightest colours, so I certainly know what you mean, and the words chosen in your poems, fits perfectly......but you are not invisible...as I'm sure you know...take care....Kathy NZ teddybear
roseoscura
Loved this write......I suppose many of us feel this way,life at times seems to pass us by.We on this corner at least some do care and you are so visible with the words you pour forth on these pages.God bless you.You are in my thoughts and prayers though I do not comment often but I do remember people in my prayers.You are not Invisible to god.He knows whats best.hug
Black_Unicorn46
You are not invisible here on cs. Your poems bring inspiration to people. We read you. We see you. wave
Charliesangels22
Aww hun :-( i understand I am 33 I have my share bit of trauma, they say what hurts makes you stronger I m not sure about that saying.Take each day as it comes and try to do the little things that make you happy.


Kind regards,


Charlie


And in the naked light, I saw
Ten thousand people, maybe more
People talking without speaking
People hearing without listening
People writing songs that voices never share
And no one dared
Disturb the sound of silence
candykid
Hello dear Kathy. ....as others have stated before me, you are not invisible, despite how much you may feel at times that you are. Sometimes that feeling becomes more prevalent than it does at other times, however you may be reminded that God sees you more than anyone else, and what a blessing it is to know that.....as you most certainly do.....will bring back a write of mine as a reminder....stay strong.purple heart
doglover14
Kathy ~ It breaks my heart to know that this is the way you feel !

BUT KATHY ~ IT IS JUST NOT TRUE
You are SO VISABLE to so many people on this site.

You influence ~ and inspire ~ and affect so many lives with your beautidul poetry..

You warm so many hearts and strengthen so many souls by writing about your strong beiiefs.

I SEE YOU.
MANY OTHERS SEE YOU.

Mady: angel: teddybear wave
marikiaonline today!
We do care, Kathy, it is as obvious as can be, and we love you so much!

...hope for the hopeless,
I'm learning to cope with the emotionless
Mediocrity of day-to-day living.
How can I help but be restless,
When everything seems so tasteless,
And all of the colors seem to have faded away?! (but!!!)
This is life
And everything's all right,
Living, living, living, living,
Living, living, living, living life!

Yes, this is life, and we've all learned to cope, haven't we? God bless you!heart beating

Oceanzest
New York, concrete jungle where dreams are made of
There's nothin' you can't do
Now you're in New York
These streets will make you feel brand new
The lights will inspire you
Let's hear it for New York, New York,
New York

-Alicia Keys chorusing Jay-Z's "Empire State of Mind"

Honey you're lucky to be there, I've been once and was wowed.
Enjoy it!
sophiasummer
To You

You are not invisible to us, you know who.

Sometimes to see through the screen, it takes different lighting, like a different view.
Dig deep as you do.

We love you for you
You are not alone.

Never

Love Soph xx

teddybear
Ronnie779online today!
I love this poem!- i can so identify with the feelings you express here...fantastic write...and my sympathies
to a fellow sufferer of 'invisibilty syndrome'
godsprincessonline today!
Yes Kathy NZ - I know I'm not invisible to everyone and definitely not to God. But there are some people in my life that seem to look right over me in meetings (especially at church, etc.) like I'm not there. Even my own family. I know my friends here are wonderful and encouraging and I really appreciate it.

Kathy from Upstate New York!

teddybear
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you Roseoscura. I'm honored to receive your comment. I'm not invisible all the time but right now a few things in my life make me feel that way. However, I know my Lord is with me and always sees me. "His Eye Is On the Sparrow"!

Thank you for your kind and sweet words.

Kathy teddybear
roseoscura
I understand your feeling even christians show this attitude,some of them look past you,even the pastors wife has time to talk to selected people.I feel its a place these days where they come to gossip.They listen to the word of god and the moment they come out they sit gossiping.But we have to trust god and go on.hug
lovecanberealonline today!
Hi Kathy...We all feel the loneliness. The existential nature of this loneliness; we ALL feel this from time to time. More so, more so as we grow older. I know you have your faith, which sustains you. I also have my faith, of a slightly different kind. (OK, this you may find hard to believe). Anyway, the World is now increasingly bent toward Youth Culture; although, if you ask me, much of this is increasingly vacuous; and talent, it is said, remains approximately constant. This is what we are up against, as writers. You are valued here, as I can tell, by the way, your poems are appreciated and read here. Thanks for all your poetry, and writing here...you are appreciated.
southmiami4321online today!
GP from a New Yorker just like you....



You are always with us, in our thoughts, in our comments in the poetry corner, and with your loving God.SM
lookn2share
godsprincess: I feel you lovely lady...and you definitely are in no way invisible! The god of invisibility is still looking out for you...and knowing you believe that should help you to feel better. You will overcome...angel
Ann32love
We are here and means that you are visible
You are an inspiration to many people
Sometimes we might not express our gratitude
But your words put us in a good mood.

We might not comment all the time
But you are in our minds
Life doesn't move in a straight course
It has twists,turns and detours

Kathy don't quit during challenges and trials
Take the lessons to aid your survival
I Kathy you may feel blue
But I am here for you.hug
candykid
Happy Birthday. ..!!cheers
JimEee
Your cloak of invisibility has been shattered by your many friends
who see you as a poet and a beloved friend whom they relish.
Your invisibility leaks poems which we all enjoy ~

Fond wishes your friend
JimEee
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you Christian - a year older today - ugh!
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you Black Unicorn - I'm touched at your comment.

Kathy teddybear
Ronnie779online today!
Its your birthday today ?- Many happy returns! ..hope your having a superb day and don't feel the way you have been as laid out in the poem- best wishes!
southmiami4321online today!
Happy birthday, GP!!!!party party balloons elephant danceline violin SM
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you everybody! Christian spilled the beans so to speak!
ali110online today!
Wow ..wonderful poem Princess , thank you for gifted words
Ann32love
Happy Birthday.People who make others feel invisible don't have a good relationship with our invisible Creator whose love is visible in the way he made us-fearfully and wonderfully. I hope you use today to reflect on how much God loves you.applause
doglover14
HAPPY BIRTHDAY KATHY !!!!!cheering wine teddybear

MADY
roseoscura
A Happy & God blessed birthday dear Kathy,have a great day,knowing that above all God loves you and will watch over you.bouquet teddybear hug
JimEee
Wishing Kathy the invisible lady
a much deserved Birthday ~

May stars shine like birthday candles in the heavenly
nighttime sky, radiating our fondest wishes ~

Happy Birthday my Invisible friend ~
JimEee
cafetwo2010
Happy Birthday Kathy!
Cafe..
heart wings kiss heart wings
Jim
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you to the following for your Birthday wishes which has made my Birthday so special: Christian, Ronnie, South Miami, Ann32Love, Mady, Roseocura, JimEee, and last but NOT least - CAFE!!! How special is that. So good to hear from you Cafe Jim!

To all of you - ty - hope I didn't miss anyone!

Kathy teddybear gift
godsprincessonline today!
CharliesAngels: Thank you for the Sound of Silence - love that song! And thank you for the encouragement!

Kathy teddybear
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you Christian. I do lean on God heavily. It's the humans in my life that sometimes make me feel like an idiot or insignificant (family/friends).

Kathy teddybear
godsprincessonline today!
Bless you Mady. I just get to feeling blue sometimes which is caused by certain relatives and friends in my life. I am 67 years old but still have 4 Aunts and 2 Uncles. 3 of the Aunts seem to treat me like I'm 7 years old. Then there are people at church meetings when I speak who ignore me like I never spoke - I was later told that my voice is not in a frequency that a lot of people can hear and to not take it personally! REALLY? GET REAL! Maybe the rest of you are too loud and talking all at once! Brother!

Oh well. Thank you for being such a good friend and such a sweetheart.

Kathy teddybear
godsprincessonline today!
Marikia - thank you for your compassionate words and the video you shared. You are a good long-distance friend and a sweetheart - just like Mady. I can count on you two to bring me out of a slump!

Kathy teddybear
socrates44online today!
Kathy

You are unique in God's eye's regardless of how some persons may behave towards you.
You are a fine poet and a tremendous inspiration to others at poetry corner as they have testified here.

Have a wonderful day!
godsprincessonline today!
Oceanzest: New York CITY does fascinate a lot of people. Personally I prefer the rest of New York State. I am from a county in UPSTATE New York near Binghamton (Broome County). I'm in Tioga County which is very rural farm country and very redneck country! Wouldn't be surprised to find some stiles and a few shotguns in them there hills! rolling on the floor laughing And I'm not just a kiddin! Last year a couple of guys set off about $2,000 worth of tannerite - ignited by a gun blast at a propane tank! It was felt all the way to Broome County!!

In Upstate New York we have the Finger Lakes - which is the area I'm near - Great Lakes - St. Lawrence River - Lake George - Lake Placid - Adirondack Mountains - Hersey Diamond Mine - Howes Caverns - WINE COUNTRY around the lakes! Watkins Glen and Montour Falls with the beautiful falls (very close to me). People say New York wine is good! I don't know as I don't drink alcohol - can't stand the taste.

So New York is much much more then just a city. The city seems to get all the attention - but is is a 4-6 hour drive from where I am. New York is a very big state! You really should visit the natural beauty of it.
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you Sophia - you are such a dear.

Kathy hug
godsprincessonline today!
Thank you Ronnie. It is good to know that I'm not alone in feeling this way. And I'm sorry you feel invisible as well. However, you are not invisible here at the CS corner. Thank you so much for reading and for letting me know you liked the poem. It means a lot.

Kathy hug teddybear
godsprincessonline today!
Roseocura - no one is perfect - the church is the people. Humans are born with a sinful nature because of Adam and Eve. We are all sinners. There is a post on Facebook "Don't bother to come to church if you are not a sinner because everyone of us there is a sinner." That includes the gossips and the minister's wife.

However, I go to church to worship my Lord and Savior. There are good Pastors out there and one helped me a great deal to understand others through a 29 week Bible Study called "Healing Journey". Everyone is on their own life journey and their life has made them the way they are. How we deal with it and them is part of the study. But not going to church and worshiping my Lord would only hurt me.

End of sermon.

laugh

Kathy teddybear
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