Foot Path

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Aug 2017 1,023 Views 6 comments

The Foot Path

My toes touched the sand
beauty
softness
barefeet

I saw footprints

many

I placed my foot in many
some big some small

some steering there some steering over yond

what footprint was I following?
what
was on their mind?

I don't know

but I walked concaved into a
footprint
I wondered who would
walk in mine

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Posted: Aug 2017

About this poem:

A private time

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godsprincessOwego, New York USAAug 2, 2017

And where did their path lead you? Be careful of which path you follow. Like in life - don't always follow in others' footsteps as it might not be the right way.

I really enjoyed this whimsical read. But my mind always has to go deeper for some reason.

Thanks for sharing!

Kathy

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainAug 2, 2017

Nicely done Soph, we all leave some footprint in this life.
Rob xx

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandAug 3, 2017

Hello godprincess

The footsteps never lead me,I just love the feel and wandered.
It was my horizon I saw

We can at any times delve deep, yet that becomes a personal leap

I also love jumping on sand castles.

Soph

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandAug 3, 2017

Hello Rob

wow! some people have big feet!
Then the lovely teeny tiny ones!
Was a great walk!

Soph xx

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandAug 5, 2017

Hello morgen90210

Thankyou

create your own, most people love to insert their foot (their tread)
and carry on.

Soph