Together we walk by the babbling brook, Slowly flow the waters upon their way. So cool are the waters on which we look, As along forest floor the brook does play.
You and i standing in each others arms, As we watch the brook as it softly flows. Sun glints on the water enhancing charms, As sweet Love within our hearts it does grow.
We hear the soft voice of the babbling brook, It whispers its cool words into our ears, Upon the playful waters we do look. Remembering all our most peaceful years.
Our Love shall ever be an open book, As in Love we stand By The Babbling Brook.
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Posted: Sep 2017
About this poem:
I had a dream and wrote it down in Sonnet form. The dream was love.
Hi Catlyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment. I am glad you liked the piece. I only put a poem on now and again here on the poetry corner. So many old friends are gone now. I am still trying to get to grips with the Sonnet as you can see. I shall keep at it. Hope you are doing well. Have a wonderful Wednesday. One day i may be back posting regularly again. Hugs....Mike. XX .
Hi Kathy, thank you for dropping by and the comment. I am glad you liked the piece. You know me, the eternal dreamer. Trying the sonnet form for a little while. Hope you are well. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX .
HI Redex, thank you for dropping by and the comment. I am glad you liked the piece. It is good that you could picture the scene and feel the love through the words. Still just trying the Sonnet form. Hope you are well. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKNov 23, 2017
Lovely dream inspired a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading thanks for sharing
Hi Happy, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my sonnet. It is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. Love flows where the waters of the brook flow. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Comments (9)
The last lines are esp. touching:
Our Love shall ever be an open book,
As in Love we stand By The Babbling Brook.
Great to see a new poem from you(though maybe you've been writing all along-it's just me who's been gone??lol)
Cat
Kathy
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