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by RedexNorthumberland, England, UK

Oct 2017 452 Views 6 comments

Haiku tales on the river bank

Author: Redex
ripling trickling river
cormorant wings outstretched
fish hiding laughing
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Posted: Oct 2017
About this poem:
i saw i wrote

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Comments (6)

gnj4u
gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAOct 11, 2017
Hi, Redex,
Your 17 syllables captured such a beautiful moment. Thank you for sharing it with us. It's nice to be left with the image of fish...laughing.
johnjjm
johnjjmco westmeath0000, Westmeath IrelandOct 11, 2017
yeah maybe they laughing feels like that sometimes when the worm is taken without a touch often thought your laughing at me but then theirs tomorrow
SCatlyn
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 11, 2017
Wow, this is excellent, Redex! Love it!!

SCatlyn daisy
Redex
RedexOPNorthumberland, England UKOct 12, 2017
gnj4u thank you for reading, yes i like the tradional 5-7-5 style with season and story. It is hard sometimes with dyslexia to get the 17 right cheering but thankyou i did
Redex
RedexOPNorthumberland, England UKOct 12, 2017
johnj nice to see you at poetry corner, and yes your image makes me chuckle too.
where would we be Johnj without finding the fun side of things even if it is only our minds laugh
Redex
RedexOPNorthumberland, England UKOct 12, 2017
Hi SCatlyn thank you glad you liked it hug
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by Redex (22 Poems)
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