God versus Free Will
If a God exists as is perceived,
there's no free will, as is believed,
I travel on my pre-destined ways,
organised by he who says,
For he would know well in advance,
my plans, my thoughts, its not by chance,
If I'm in this world by his design,
tis he who knows, he draws the line,
When I was born he would know the date,
of my demise, my final fate,
He would know my plans, what I would do,
my good deeds, my bad ones too,
I'd have no choice, I can't change lanes,
or throw a dice,,or take the reins,
If I am a product of his creation,
should I dance with joy, with elation?
For he would have made me what I am,
and knew.............
exactly............
what I'd do,
So, if I'm good, it's by his hand,
and I get to see the promised land,
If I'm bad, and I should fall,
twas he also made that call,
He cant complain or punish me
for things I've done that he could see,
And if I'm flawed, it's not down to me,
Look to God,
if thats how I came to be,
I didn'nt make myself you see,.
my life I dont need to justify,
if I do,,,,,,,
It's all a lie,,
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Posted: Apr 2010
Comments (8)
Good deal, though.
Well written poem, by the way. And thought provoking
As regards "free will" ...
Our life was already written in our script before we were born.
With no room for free will.
But...only when we unlock our scripts, can we have free will and and manifest positive things in our life.
We are the creators.
A gold star for this one Opti