Loveliness tilts the chalice raise to lips cranberry magenta recurves drawn an archer’s bow
Sovereign Blanc to savor and swirl ongoing story begin to unravel swirl in reverse toward retrospect tilts unraveling first things first
Running and skipping thru neighborhood meadow Snapping them up by fistful and clusters There’s more for the taking while racing about Feet a-flying Eyes a-wide Shrieks delight ((Make Daisy Chains!!
Yellow buttons squeeze amid white fan arrays Interweaving stems until the fingers green Longer weaving longer one wish away farther twist wish twist wish twist wish
That first crush dispense with far too many some daisies get bruised got pik’t too hard ranking second third and so on yet far n away Squish the best kiss’s of All Perhaps so avoided these crush-coincides a fifth a sixth and so-on kids!
Subject to karma its outcome seeming half an eternity in the living sapphire dreams will come will go daisy chain wishes sip the Cognac of __ Beautiful within \ Beautiful without Petals held from youth beam an elder woman’s smile Tilting the chalice most beautifully
th^pines^^
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Posted: Jan 2018
About this poem:
[this one took a little time; in little ways ode fashion]
Friend, your writing style is very crafty. I believe I will place this poem in my "PICTURE POEMS" file. So much modern poetry has rhyme without reason, a juggling of words by the writer to create a catchy cadence. But what about meaning? Where or what is the intended message. Just what the hell is the writer trying to say?
Your poems are beautiful. There are no rules when it comes to expression in writing. You quite masterfully "paint" a picture in your works we all can identify with and appreciate. Thank you.
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Your poems are beautiful. There are no rules when it comes to expression in writing. You quite masterfully "paint" a picture in your works we all can identify with and appreciate.
Thank you.