The Suitor

So he fetched her the ocean in a marble,
wrapped up in a velvet rag,
and tied with a golden braid
from the dreams of a white-headed hag...
She twiddled the glassy green sea-sphere,
its white horses frozen inside,
then she bade him:
"Release me that stallion!
Else ne'er shall I be thy sweet bride!"
Well he smiled:
"I know just how to do it!",
and he pitched the glass ball at her throne -
she was still picking shards from the cushions,
as he danced with the white-haired old crone!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2018
About this poem:
A little fairy tale :-) It's not a limerick, but I couldn't think which style fitted...pantoum, ghazal...what on earth are those?!

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godsprincessonline today!
Love it! That's so cute and serves her right!

Kathywave
MerryOars
She does, doesn't she!laugh

Thanks, Godsprincess :-)
Happychatty1
Enjoyed readinng this poem thanks for sharing it wave
MerryOars
Thank you, Happychatty :-) wave
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