Alone

The whole city is wet
From the rain.
All the night and a cold day
We are not together ...
It's a pity.....

Wet umbrellas
Over the wet bridges,
The light trembles
From the darkness
Taxi....

And it does not matter
Whose fault is it.
I walk longs the street
Alone,
The unspeakable wall
Of our words ..
Sadness...

There is nothing left,
The whole world
Has become like black
And white movie,
I know that you
Are still waiting for me,
But the love goes away
It will not return,
There are no tears
In my eyes.
it's just rain,
Goodbye
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2018
About this poem:
I apologize in advance for errors in the English grammar.

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Comments (20)

niah9
Powerful write salamuna.....emotions explained perfectly...and the pain is raw.......Kathy bouquet
salamuna
Thank you Kathy. I appreciate it. Yes , right words. a sea of emotions at the moment.
mcradloff
Good poem, really described the pain felt with love that becomes something else that is most unpleasant.crying
salamuna
Thank you mcradloff . Its just my emotions. :-)
soulofu
Hi Salmuna,
Don't know to call it a poem or a letter to someone..... anyway, there is a lot of painful emotions in it.
Love.........SoulofU.teddybear
salamuna
Thank you so much Soulofu . that's was a poem which grew up from my emotions crying
Yankee4you
I found an old painting of a girl dressed in 1880's styles, standing under an umbrella. So I bought it. I really like the feeling it gives me, much like the feeling you've expressed so well in this poem.
salamuna
Thank you so much Yankee4you. I really appreciate it .
salamuna
Thanks for your comment Akeldama40 , but.missed opportunities were not in my mind when i did write it
godsprincessonline today!
Very sad - the death of a relationship. Take care.

Kathy hug
salamuna
Thank you Kathy. But its not so sad, because any death also means a new srtart isnt"t it? warm wishes from Holland, Lilly kiss
be_my_buddy
Beautiful poem!
salamuna
Thank you be_my_buddy
morgen90210
So much emotions
Its real and yet almost like
Yesteryear of past
Its the past fading

Like a moving dark cloud
Yet the wetness remains
I feel it and makes me sick
The ending is so perfect


teddybear
salamuna
Thank you for understanding morgen90210. appreciate it.cheering
Happychatty1
Very emotive poem , you describe the scene so well.
Sometimes the sky cries with us,.look out for the rainbow Lilly
teddybear
salamuna
thanks you so much Happychatty. really appreciated cheering
salamuna
Thank you Ru for your encouraging comment. I do apprecciate it. Regards,
Lillyhandshake
studecar
Thank you for your poem ,I read it deeply because I have been there and I understand the torment. studecarprofessor
salamuna
studecar thank you for your comment. Appreciated. cheering
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