The Songthrush Song

It's funny how we go about, like ships in the night
Wondering Did I do this right or Did I hurt somebody's Heart?
Do people love to share or are they too afraid?
We often think we are estranged and yet this person, that person
Yearns for fellowship

The nighttime comes all mercy gone
What is the answer pray
And then a song thrush clears it's throat
To welcome this new day

Whatever was I thinking of, what darkness came to lurk?
To dampen my ardour and steal my precious joy
Oh, Take care my friend,Let's leap the ravene of sorrow
We'll land afresh and say, "What's this?"
The songthrush sings," It's Yesturday's Tomorrow!"



Christine B
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Posted: Aug 2018
About this poem:
Thank you for reading my poem.
It's my first attempt so guidance is very welcome.

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Comments (5)

godsprincessonline today!
I have no formal training - just shoot from the heart is my advice. And it sounds like you did. Just keep writing your feelings.

Kathy hug
Happychatty1online today!
A lovely poem to read, thank you for sharing it and I look forward to reading more from you applause wave
flyme1
Nice very thoughtful.
trurorob
Not bad, not bad at all, couple of typos, I found it a little wordy, try not to elongate the poem with words that are not necessary.
Rob
horseman1949
i like it very much
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