Reaching beyond the miles In search of something more than smiles To find a connection More than words can express Something unwritten Far from a feeling, a knowing
Taking an online spark into reality Is what we all seek But geography builds a barrier We each choose not to break So left in our corner we weep For a love we desperately desire
Too weak in fear of pain Our hearts are left in the mire Of our own creation
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKAug 5, 2018
Thanks for sharing your poem that I am sure many may relate to regarding the challenges patience, commitment and sacrifice that distance can bring in order for a relationship it to last, work well, however it has successfully worked for some. Here is hoping many more will find the love of their life soon be they just round the corner or not
Cosmicgirl68OPChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandAug 7, 2018
Hi Happychatty :) Thank you so much for your lovely comment We are all hoping to find that someone special
BviacOltenia, Lithuania Minor LithuaniaAug 8, 2018
Your poem rising good filling. Interesting how to beginning poem? Suddenly coming inspiration, and must/ need / could to write? My hobby complete music with software, better idea to find original text for composition.
I believe it is in our own choosing that pain and suffering is with us. We can attempt to break that if we have enough strength and confidence to tread in the unknown.
A lovely but sad poem.
EdwaltersOntario, CanadaAug 27, 2018
Amazing piece of expression
guitarpoet99Wendell, North Carolina USAOct 7, 2018
Yes -reaching into the beyond for something or someone special. As Tom Petty sang, Runnin’ down a dream...... Lord I miss Tom. Oh yes where was I? I like your line ‘Taking an online spark into reality, Is what we all seek’ and then there’s the barrier and then found sadness. I have a poem ‘A Day at the Beach’ on searching beyond ourselves. guitarpoet99
AsonikaBlue sea, Trelawny JamaicaOct 7, 2018
Wow it's such a lovely poem I enjoy reading especially how it speaks reality but I believe love is greater than distant.
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Here is hoping many more will find the love of their life soon be they just round the corner or not
Thank you so much for your lovely comment
We are all hoping to find that someone special
A lovely but sad poem.