i was floating on a cotton bud

i was floating on a cotton bud high up in the sky,
when an angel flew by, and asked me ‘hey, why?’
there’s so much work that needs to be done
here on this earth, so many issues. everyone!

i told the light creature, that i’d had enough,
of humans who’re selfish, uncouth and so rough.
for all his intelligence, man has ruined this world
with plastic, and warheads, and hatred unfurled.

look at the environment, the seas. even space.
the murder of forests, and oceans’ deface.
dead satellites in orbit, we now call space junk,
what’s there to shout about, this planet is sunk!

so the angel got busy, to turn me around,
from my floating carriage, in silent surround.
go back my dear fellow, to the sins of the world,
but look at the goodness, your vision unfurled.

the birds in the skies, chirping and singing away,
the great humpbacks of the oceans, a sight on any day.
the lord of the jungle, with his mighty roar,
and the graceful gazelle, we all love and adore.

there are good people, if you really care to look,
not in the bible, the koran or any other holy book,
but just look around you, and marvel and see
happy children’s faces from any degree.

for that aught be the reason, to strive and to toil,
and make this earth safer for them to grow tall,
the beauty of love, and the tests we must solve
to get goodness remembered, and bad to resolve.

so i floated down gently on the same cotton bud
and got off my carriage, with ne’er a thud.
and looking around me, i was in this room
chockfull of children, and no elbowroom…..

all colours, all sizes. all smiling. .... no gloom.
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Posted: Aug 2018
About this poem:
we see what we want to see, though it is getting more and more difficult to see the good over the bad of this world. peace.

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godsprincessonline today!
My sentiments exactly - Our children are our future. Good write.

Kathy wave
virgosignonline today!
True dear Kathy. But remember, we too were our parents children, and the world just keeps getting knocked about, generation to generation. Maybe,there is a slightly better awareness this generation .... sad flower
Deanaa
"there are good people, if you really care to look,
not in the bible, the koran or any other holy book,
but just look around you, and marvel and see
happy children’s faces from any degree"

Beautiful verses, beautiful poem!
I enjoyed the reading. Thank you.



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ponytail123
Good morning...
I really enjoyed reading this poem... So down to earth. Well done.
virgosignonline today!
Thank you Deana. Of course there are good people out there. We just need to find them cool x
earthwindandfire
I hope you disposed of your cotton bud responsibly :)
virgosignonline today!
Why should I Earth? That’s my carriage rolling on the floor laughing
egle8
very nice poem and beautiful words .
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