should one express their feelings? shall I lay my heart out bare? to one I'm not permitted to cherish is it wrong to say I care? I wish to only share my leaning yet my emotion's danger fraught how may I speak the words of meaning? a constant struggle with my thought perhaps remain forever silent wise course, could be a normal man accept that some things were never meant to be spoken save for that they can but turn my back on all that feeds me? on passions path, I vowed to follow I'm at a place, I should never be where all my past musings ring hollow for quite a while now it's been clear how I feel, what must be said prudence ever alerts the fear for 'tis another she has wed oh, there's more here for to know of the one that leaves me wild she projects that robust glow of woman carrying her child her first, the birth is due in may she said, it is to be a boy perhaps there's nothing more to say her eyes, her heart, her love, her joy should I be the fool and tell her? my need, to hold her in my arms and me, be held alone in her eyes forever one within her charms but no, I can not, so I shall not disturb the life of one so dear I must show real love for another ....merely wipe away my tears
Hi there, hedistuff, I admire your transparency,and the strength to walk away. Now that's true love!!..JG
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAJun 9, 2010
many times through too many years, I've had ocassion to arrive in happenstance land...where, I've allowed myself to be taken for the wild ride...all too often, bumpy and jarring. now, though enabled to act impulsively, these days, I tell myself 'no', and just let it go. I suppose that maturity and wisdom (and maybe thoughtfulness or just age) are the culprits...
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 9, 2010
A wonderful read Hedistuff, I suppose all of your conclusions are right, How I wish more people would have this wisdom.
hedistuff - very appropriate and loving for another and yourself....this poem touched me deeply...thank you :)
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJun 9, 2010
I admire your strength & decision to walk away...it shows the love one has.Lovely expression of feelings.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJun 10, 2010
I don't know Hedi, I would venture to say that every circumstance is different, and god help us to find the right wisdom every time..., sometimes, a gal telling me she fell in love with me long after I moved on and got involved with another, helped volumes with my self-esteem, I don't know, not an easy one,, however, as you pointed out, boy, can we mess it up...
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I admire your transparency,and the strength to walk away. Now that's true love!!..JG