Impolite dreams

by yasparkWilliamsville, New York, USA

Nov 2018 560 Views 8 comments

Impolite dreams

I pulled myself
From the dark abyss
Of my morning dreams
My brain my restless CPU
Has scrambled bits and pieces
Of my thoughts
Into the colourful
Collection of randomness
I tried to remember it
But the shadows of my dreams
Whispered unspoken words
And fled from me again
Giggling impolitely

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Posted: Nov 2018

About this poem:

It's all about dreams

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Comments (8)

EXREDNorthumberland, England UKNov 14, 2018

I have read a few times and yes i guese thats how it happens sometimes. I liked the giggle bit too, but not impolitely

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USANov 14, 2018

Thank you, maybe "impolitely" was an attempt to make it sound less serious?

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godsprincessOwego, New York USANov 14, 2018

Very frustrating sometimes when I wake up and have been having a really good dream and want to remember it - and puff!!! It's gone!!

Good description.

Kathy

Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland AustraliaNov 14, 2018

Hi Yaspark ........yep that's pretty much how it happens for me too..........nice write .....regards NU

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USANov 14, 2018

Thank you Kathy! Yep, very frustrating indeed, Feels sometimes that dreams are key to what our mind is quietly doing in the background, and then we forget and have no clue...
Yanina