I would like to become A white cloud Sailing across the sky. A white white cloud I cannot overcome My feelings of guilt And death I know I will become A cloud My pain will leave me And somewhere Far away I will feel warmth again Like I felt As a child I look to the sky But I still cannot find The answer I seek White white cloud
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKNov 18, 2018
Thank you for sharing your poem ...I wish you peace Salam’s a I used to enjoy watching clouds very much as a young girl and still do..can understand why you would write about them in such a way..
EXREDNorthumberland, England UKNov 19, 2018
I hope the white cloud makes a different feeling for you now Enjoyed reading
Maybe the white cloud is an Angel looking over you. Your time to be one will come but only after you have completed your mission here on Earth. No one knows what day or time that is - only the Father knows for sure. Hang in there. Personally I would love to be a star. But only when it's my turn. Take care.
Kathy
zeroBalanceKolkata, West Bengal IndiaNov 19, 2018
I wish i could get some drops from the Clouds...:::
Thank you Kathy. maybe you are right about Angel...as about stars...the star is beautiful, but it is heavy and stands still, clouds are in constant motion and they have lightness. greetings, Lilly
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I used to enjoy watching clouds very much as a young girl and still do..can understand why you would write about them in such a way..
Enjoyed reading
Kathy
greetings,
Lilly