JimEee ~ How lovely this poem is. I was a little surprised however ~ lol ~ as going by the title I thought perhaps it was another of your "thoughts of a 16 year old ~ in the body of a senor ~ masterpieces".
Maybe you should consider re-titling it "Arms of Love"...or "Yearning For You".
Well done..beautiful. Mady
JimEeeOPNew Haven, Connecticut USADec 1, 2018
EXRED A poet thanks you, for your welcomed needed comment. May your day be filled with Wine & Roses JimEee
JimEeeOPNew Haven, Connecticut USADec 1, 2018
doglover14 Mady, I agree, I changed the name of the poem to "Yearning for You"
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Maybe you should consider re-titling it "Arms of Love"...or "Yearning For You".
Well done..beautiful.
Mady
A poet thanks you, for your welcomed
needed comment.
May your day be filled with Wine & Roses
JimEee
Mady, I agree, I changed the name of the poem
to "Yearning for You"
~Thanks for your input ~
JimEee
Kathy
Tis Kathy, the one and only,
Gods Princess
Oh! how nice it is to hear from you ~
JimEee
Keep up the writing..
How nice of you to say!
Made me feel good ~
Thank you
JimEee
It's nice to hear from you again!
Your comments made me feel good ~
Thank you, I have enjoyed your poems also!
JimEee