Maybe your eyes could tell me That you'll always love me Maybe your eyes could tell me You're gonna kiss me tenderly
I know they are so blue And oh how they shine But when I look at you I'm speechless and I'm so inclined
To just stand there and stare So if you care if you really do Maybe you're eyes could tell me That your love for me is true
Maybe I could tap my shoes with morse code But when you are near I freeze in place If this love story could ever be told Maybe your eyes could tell me you long for a sweet embrace
Maybe your eyes could tell me Just how every tomorrow could be Maybe your eyes could tell me You're gonna kiss me tenderly
There are many posts here that never get any comments whether they be positive, negative or neutral. I feel it a disservice to those who truly make a genuine effort. I do understand that there are many complex dynamics that would determine whether or not one would feel compelled to comment or to not comment, but when I see a genuine effort such as this one that you have posted, I feel it deserves to have at very least one individual's opinion....it is of my honest opinion that your collection of words caused me to read it twice. I would hope that you consider that a compliment, as that is what I mean it to be....if it is not something that is of importance to you, I understand and respect that. Just please understand that I feel an emptiness when I see an effort that goes unnoticed. Happy Holidays.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 22, 2018
your words fitted so well, they have to be heartfelt...…..loved your poem....Kathy
I do not know how I missed this one. Such a tender sweet embrace of love. It has been a while since this poem was written Eyelook4u, I hope some of your desires have come true and if not don't give up b/c love does not have a time tag on it.
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Have a good xmas xx