Over from where I sit There’s a lot going on That you’re missing out Surrendering your feelings A heartfelt connection Brings you what you seek No more lost occasions Misplaced imaginations Fleeting through space Drifting with whimsical Layers of smokey rings Endless fascinations Through the sunbeams Diagonally past lace curtains Twirling in a little draft Eddies of a spring tide Gazing into a looking glass Into the very next room Over from where I sit
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Posted: Dec 2018
About this poem:
Little abstract about seeing things through a mirror you wouldn’t normally be able to see, like round a corner.
Exred, Thank you for seeing my poem even 'more succinctly' than myself when I wrote it. I agree with what you said. Now I can even understand my feelings better. Funny how when writing abstractly such things can become so revealing especially when interpreted by others. Merry Christmas !!
BeneathePinesnorthern Catskills, New York USADec 23, 2018
Re the mirror: Up is up; left appears right, down is the other mirror we walk upon I'll elaborate (above)
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Have a very good happy xmas xxx
down is the other mirror we walk upon
I'll elaborate (above)
Enjoyable read, thank you Y4U