I need no love Anymore, I have had enough Tears before
I leave All my fears And go out To watch the amazing beauty Of life
I leave to you My unfinished story, My unfinished painting, My unfinished world.
I don’t expect from you Even a word Back I say goodbye to you Like I watch The last train, Steaming away In the rain
Now it's your turn To build your own story, Where I am not. I do not care If you Follow the wrong roads Because slaughtered love Cannot be forgiven Either by people Or Gods
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Posted: Jan 2019
About this poem:
It was written some time ago, but i needed to follow a long road to realise how much i enjoy my freedom now
There's strength in failure. There's hope in accepting what is. It gives us courage to move on. But more importantly there's peace in forgiving. We all love and then get hurt. It's reality. There's old and ten newness come again.
I've had my share. In the end it's up to us to feel either to forgive and or hope to be forgiven.
Good write about pain and disappointment. Slaughtered love is a bit harsh. I'm glad you're past it.
Yes but free from love is like you don't want to love or be loved because of the hard work we put in and then gets hurt and losing control of it?
I hope what you're saying is temporary break from being loved. I'm not saying you're wrong but we can always love ourselves without getting involved with someone who can either make us happy or hurt at the same time.
Anyways your poem is a typical expression of pain and remorse even if not a complete condescension from being betrayed. Be strong and don't be afraid to love again.
Thank you lindsyjones for your support.yes I agree to be loved, but i guess I am not able to love a man anymore..who knows? maybe it s just temporary. best wishes from Holland
Hi Salamuna......... A very honest and healing write ..........may you move forward Happy in this world of the unknown .......Regards Nu
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKJan 11, 2019
Sad, honest poem here., thank you for sharing it You seem to have gained strength and some closure and I wish you peace.hope and happiness for your future
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I've had my share. In the end it's up to us to feel either to forgive and or hope to be forgiven.
Good write about pain and disappointment. Slaughtered love is a bit harsh. I'm glad you're past it.
Good luck.
I hope what you're saying is temporary break from being loved. I'm not saying you're wrong but we can always love ourselves without getting involved with someone who can either make us happy or hurt at the same time.
Anyways your poem is a typical expression of pain and remorse even if not a complete condescension from being betrayed. Be strong and don't be afraid to love again.
Good luck.
best wishes from Holland
You seem to have gained strength and some closure and I
wish you peace.hope and happiness for your future
Rob
Right. .the train had already left the station...So maybe a new one will come soon....or who knows...
Kathy