I am free

I need no love
Anymore,
I have had enough
Tears before

I leave
All my fears
And go out
To watch the amazing beauty
Of life

I leave to you
My unfinished story,
My unfinished painting,
My unfinished world.

I don’t expect from you
Even a word
Back
I say goodbye to you
Like I watch
The last train,
Steaming away
In the rain

Now it's your turn
To build your own story,
Where I am not.
I do not care
If you
Follow the wrong roads
Because slaughtered love
Cannot be forgiven
Either by people
Or Gods
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2019
About this poem:
It was written some time ago, but i needed to follow a long road to realise how much i enjoy my freedom now

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yaspark
Your sadness is in this poem, would disagree with the last statement - forgiving is what we need to be feel free
yaspark
Meant to say “to feel free”
salamuna
I agree Yanka..I am still working on it..trying to forgive..but i guess it s a hard work..you know it too isnt it?kiss sad flower
lindsyjonesonline today!
There's strength in failure. There's hope in accepting what is. It gives us courage to move on. But more importantly there's peace in forgiving. We all love and then get hurt. It's reality. There's old and ten newness come again.

I've had my share. In the end it's up to us to feel either to forgive and or hope to be forgiven.

Good write about pain and disappointment. Slaughtered love is a bit harsh. I'm glad you're past it.

Good luck.
salamuna
I did mean that i was free from love, but,,yes forgiveness is important...maybe it s my next step..lindsyjones thank you for your comment. Appreciated cheering
lindsyjonesonline today!
Yes but free from love is like you don't want to love or be loved because of the hard work we put in and then gets hurt and losing control of it?

I hope what you're saying is temporary break from being loved. I'm not saying you're wrong but we can always love ourselves without getting involved with someone who can either make us happy or hurt at the same time.

Anyways your poem is a typical expression of pain and remorse even if not a complete condescension from being betrayed. Be strong and don't be afraid to love again.

Good luck. handshake
salamuna
Thank you lindsyjones for your support.yes I agree to be loved, but i guess I am not able to love a man anymore..who knows? maybe it s just temporary.
best wishes from Holland cheering
lindsyjonesonline today!
wave I am not giving up on love. But there is so much hard work and more pain than happiness sometimes and it is not an easy journey. Take care.bouquet
Nuwahri61
Hi Salamuna......... A very honest and healing write ..........may you move forward Happy in this world of the unknown .......Regards Nu grin
Happychatty1
Sad, honest poem here., thank you for sharing it
You seem to have gained strength and some closure and I
wish you peace.hope and happiness for your future wave teddybear
Yankee4youonline today!
The direction you are traveling is quite clear in this poem....the train is leaving the station....great lines!
trurorob
Good poem Lilly, I understand the contention but opinions are always personal.
Rob
salamuna
Hi Nu. Thank you so much for your nice words . regards. Lilly cheering
salamuna
Hi Happychatty. Thank you for you warm wishes..and no, it is no sad anymore..i really gained strength. Wish you also all the best! regards, Lilly
sad flower teddybear
salamuna
Thanks a lot Yankee4you for stopping by.
Right. .the train had already left the station...So maybe a new one will come soon....or who knows... peace wave
salamuna
Robert my friend. Yes, opinions are always personal and i do know your opinion. Thank you for your comment. Lilly x wave
rusticbink
You have expressed well, that sad zone! Forgiveness is the key tomove ahead. thumbs up
salamuna
Thank you rusticbink. I do appreciate cheering
godsprincessonline today!
You go girl!! Enjoy the rest of your life and "Good riddance to bad rubbish"! laugh Don't worry - be Happy!

Kathy banana applause teddybear
salamuna
Thank you so much Kathy US. I do my best. To be or not to be happy ng is always our own choice, isnt it) x Lilly sad flower sad flower heart wings
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