Break up

by yasparkWilliamsville, New York, USA

Jan 2019 532 Views 12 comments

Break-up

The words flew away
And silence invaded space
Between you and me.

House feels empty
What we shared burned out
Without fire

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Posted: Jan 2019

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Wintery weather occasionally stirs up sadness

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salamunaDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsJan 28, 2019

Do not be sad Yanka,sometimes is good to listen to that silence..... and i am sure one day your house will stop to feel empty

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJan 28, 2019

Hope its only occasionally, like most of us, fine poem.
Rob

EXREDNorthumberland, England UKJan 28, 2019

Wow

few words but deeply felt.

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USAJan 28, 2019

Thank you Lilly, it was a quiet phase indeed, feels good to move on.

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USAJan 28, 2019

Thank you for commenting Rob, these days I focus on sensing music in the quiet of the house.

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USAJan 28, 2019

Thank you EXRED, following your steps here and attempting to keep it short unless it’s a recipe challenge

HarbalSouth Yorkshire, England UKJan 28, 2019

That's a very sad poem, yaspark, it's amazing how much can be said in six short lines.

Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKJan 28, 2019

Powerful and really sad short poem that I can relate to from my past yaspark, thank you for sharing it sending hugs round to all who may feel this way

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USAJan 29, 2019

Thank you Harbal, good point, would stick to recipes to avoid spreading tightly packed sadness around..

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USAJan 29, 2019

Thank you Happychatty1, totally agree about sending much love and hugs to all those in need..

HarbalSouth Yorkshire, England UKJan 29, 2019

Not at all, yaspark, being multifaceted is the mark of an interesting character.

yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USAJan 30, 2019

It’s a fine line between being multifaceted and spreading yourself thin.l, will stick to something more joyful anyway. Appreciate your comments!

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