Spring Mix

Worn habits to break
Elevate through sweats and ache
Spring arrived to awake


A drop of sunshine
Is brewing in bubbling brine
Dandelion wine


A school of sardines
Swam in sync into a tin
Sardines of my dreams
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Posted: Apr 2019
About this poem:
Inspired by spring

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walRU
".. brewing in bubbling brine.."

Great line Yas
Ru
Harbal
My favourite part was:

A school of sardines
Swam in sync into a tin
Sardines of my dreams

I don't know what it means, but it's wonderful. wine
salamuna
A drop of sunshine
Is brewing in bubbling brine
Dandelion wine

that one is my favourite Yanka. Liked it a lot. great job applause kiss
trurorob
Nicely done Haiku, with humour
Rob
EXRED
Love it HAIKU my favourite poetry and this made me say hi fi peace well done I say
yaspark
Thank you Ru, made it last year - a delicious drink!
yaspark
Thank you Harbal, we're on the same page here - have no idea why I like it.
yaspark
Thank you Salamuna, you would likely appreciate drinking dandelion wine even more than reading about it.
yaspark
Thank you Rob, refining the humor part.
yaspark
Thank you RED, attempted only a few haiku so far, honored you liked the beginner's scribble.
EXRED
Scribble away that was great. I'm just a learner for haiku too and not matched your standard yet thumbs up
yaspark
Thank you RED, I believe we're here to appreciate and learn from each other.
Bernician
Love this
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