on a train to Cornwall

I sit transfixed
as thought it flies
to see warmth twice
inside her eyes

reflected in
the glassy pane
two pupils flower
past disdain

a look of summer
dressed in light
a thirst beyond
the drink of sight

some lust for life
and flirt with death
a carraige full
of moving breath

my logic screams
in measure new
though all before
wore beauty too

for even Yeats
or Neruda's verse
would paint her well
but paint her worse

a foggy smudge
her breath it seems
can not distort
the shape of dreams
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2019

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godsprincessonline today!
You sure do have a deep love for boats, trains and travel in general. I've done very limited traveling in my life. Always wondered what it would be like. Continue to share your love for travel intermixed with symbolism of love (unless I am interpreting wrong which I frequently do).

Kathy
walRU
Many thanks Kathy,
Ru
yaspark
Thank you for the “look of summer dressed in light” as well as the rest of your poem Ru!
walRU
Most welcome Yas,

Regards,
Ru
walRU
Glad you liked it Lilly,

Best,
Ru
trurorob
Nicely done RU, especially enjoyed the second last stanza, great metaphors.
Rob
southmiami4321online today!
Enjoyed this one very much. SM
walRU
Thanks Rob,

(like Padstow for the food, and Polzeath for the surfboard)

Ru
walRU
Glad you enjoyed SM,

Much appreciated,
Ru
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