by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA
Apr 2010 653 Views 8 comments
hard fallen
you took me away, to places I had never been
got to get back to you, for cast down I am
when I'm alone, I ache for you
can't stand it away, can't think what to do
were I to just hold you..kiss you
given the time, our bliss pours through
but too very often, you've gone away
no matter the words that I might say
I know I've come to love you
you're all I ever think about
if only you could love me too
it's you for me, there is no doubt
when all earth's seas will have run dry
I think of you, and I can cry
you're the closest thing to me
...should you agree
then come and lift me with your hand
we'll travel to our promised land
pass through the gates in rhyme
...it's now our time
got to get back to you, for cast down I am
when I'm alone, I ache for you
can't stand it away, can't think what to do
were I to just hold you..kiss you
given the time, our bliss pours through
but too very often, you've gone away
no matter the words that I might say
I know I've come to love you
you're all I ever think about
if only you could love me too
it's you for me, there is no doubt
when all earth's seas will have run dry
I think of you, and I can cry
you're the closest thing to me
...should you agree
then come and lift me with your hand
we'll travel to our promised land
pass through the gates in rhyme
...it's now our time
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Posted: Apr 2010
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Comments (8)
Oh cool...i get 2B 1st! Hedi: me thinks you've got it bad...reeaal bad...good for you man, and give us an encore...through the gates of rhyme!
rob
It seems u love her too much,we can feel that in this poem and others too,but what can we do?Some ways are closed.some women don't deserve those who has kind hearts.
How many times we lived with dream and we know inside it's not true?How many times we waited a call,a message,a date and nobody called or sent message or asked for a date?We just dreamt about it,and lived with dreams,but for how many long time we will live like that?God knows.
''It's u for me,there's no doubt'',i felt it's like obsession,also can't know about future.This is true hedistuff,but what can we say for those who has kind hearts,what can we say for u hedistuff?
If she doesn't want u,try to find a woman who has same kindness,don't wait a lot,times run quickly,ask her if she really care,if not,search for another who deserve u and marry her,but don't forget to invite us for the wedding ok?
got to get back to you, for cast down I am
when I'm alone, I ache for you
can't stand it away, can't think what to do
were I to just hold you..kiss you
given the time, our bliss pours through
but too very often, you've gone away
no matter the words that I might say"
hey, Hedi, hope you're feeling better,[the healer in me cares..., keep us posted, will you?] hey, did you read my mind with this poem? How come you 'know' so much about me? lol, thanks for sharing friend, nice read, I think of you as the eternal romantic...