If WE were God

If we could recreate and start again, the creation
of man,, what then?,,, so that we were God,
could we produce a better plan?

And IF we were God and this was now, would we
do better?, would we know how?
Would we call a meeting and define our plan,
to produce this good and better man?

Would we open the floor for debate, on the
best way to recreate?
We could give him freewill to play his part,
instill emotions for a feeling heart,

And we'd understand if he went astray, we'd
help him along througout his day,
He'd be our SPECIAL creation, created by
us in our perfect nation,

And at the end when he was done, we'd
take him home cause he'd be our SON,

Yes, that's what we could do, and don't
you see,,,he'd be soo much better, created
by you and me.

WOULDN'T HE?
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Posted: Apr 2010

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Comments (6)

jazzy75
Thought provoking...love the questions your raise :)applause
madtat29
Ingenious...drinking
caroljoyce
You are, in a sense. Great piece.
gnj4u
Hi, optimisticme,
Would he? Thanks for posing the questions.
agoodguy2have
man you are DEFINITELY in the groove man. So philosophical and a great rhyme too! accolades! accolades! applause! applause!
caroljoyce
Leave him alone, he is not'mocking God'.You are completely missing the entire point. Stop peddling fear.
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