by EXREDNorthumberland, England, UK
Dec 2019 428 Views 10 comments
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Comments (10)
Kathy
Excellent Haiku!
(in the tradition of the original haiku masters like Basho, etc.)
I rate it A+.
My favourite Haiku format:
line1 - introduction.........heron still, watching
line2 - expansion...........rippling water hides dinner
line3 - conclusion..........head dipped, gotcha
(punch line)
Rob