As a child I recall such horrible visions... Staring at four corners of the room in my prison... Spirits would appear in such abhorrent conditions... And torment me, I felt no choice, yet made my decision...
Lacking toys that normal children play with as kids... A broken mirror, most pieces clear, I formed a crude sphere... What was I to do?......I longed for light in the dark... A spark of thought, I do recall, I'd lost all my fears...
I summoned several Demons through a process of prayers... They dared me to surrender on invisible chairs... Then handed me a laser and said...'child don't fear'... 'Just point the light, into the shards, no need to be scared'...
As light reflected into the first piece of sharp glass... It's speed continued to proceed....it went very fast... It traveled from one broken piece, then into the next... Complex it was, the Demons knelt.....'Twas Satan at last...
'Confused' is not a word that I would use to describe... The feelings that the Devil made me feel deep inside... He offered me some candy in exchange for my soul... His goal was done, Lucifer won, a fallen Angel's Son.....
This does not sound like my friend Christian at all. God Bless you and keep you safe for eternity!!
Kathy
HarbalEsquireDoncaster, South Yorkshire, England UKJan 16, 2020
We are all just human beings, Christian, and those among us with any decency know we could be better humans. I don't know what happens after we die, but while we are on the earth we can't be angels.
Yes we should be more caring, enjoyed the read, even if some did disturb me a tad. rob
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 16, 2020
Kathy dear....this is just an example of intense writing. I think many can write poems or lyrics that at first glance seem shocking, and perhaps are, but I do like to push limits once in a while..... thank you sweetheart.
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 16, 2020
Harbal....we are just human. Decency and Angelic behavior seem appropriate together. It’s great to read your feedback old friend.
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 16, 2020
Nu, what’s new? Thanks for the comment; and as always......stay in the shallow end, your lovely spouse doesn’t need another scare.
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 17, 2020
Rob, I am particularly fond of your comments in general, but this time I think I have accomplished my intentions to disturb such a devout Atheist, even if in only the slightest degree.
EXREDNorthumberland, England UKJan 18, 2020
Candy yep disturbing poem but some have actually been there poor souls
Demons and angels were part of my Catholic upbringing since I could remember. I don't use ouija boards because I don't want demons to be around me.
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 19, 2020
Ex, whether or not any souls have had an experience that resembles such a story that is purely fictitious, I know not. Nonetheless, thank you for your comment..Now how about that sloe-gin fizz?
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 19, 2020
Mc.... I think it wise to stay away from Ouija boards or any other divination devices. I also find it highly ironic that Hasbro, one of the world’s leading toy producers for young children manufactures and distributes such a product.
This doesn't sound like you at all. Anyways nice.... try
Stay blessed!
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 26, 2020
Angel, I am certainly taking that as a compliment despite our previous brief acquaintances. I am fully aware of the stark contrast of my birth name that seemingly contradicts the fictional story written here. I must admit, your commentary is funny, yet appealing....Thank you.
beautifully written, enjoyed your style. interesting topic . i beleive all kids are born as angels, the rest is their own choice. I hope than candy was woth it. regards, Liy
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 26, 2020
Sal....I thank you for your compliments regarding the style in which this is written. I do realize this is a very off-putting style for many readers due to the questionable subject matter. This is simply an imaginative work of pure fiction, yet had it been real.....knowing this fiend, it may have been worth it, being purely dependent on the “flavor.”
yasparkWilliamsville, New York USAJan 27, 2020
It was an adventure to follow you to your dark places Candy, we all have our own, it’s good to get your perspective, thanks for sharing!
Candykid2Sterling, Virginia USAJan 28, 2020
Yas....I thank you kindly for those specific comments. It was my intention to pull the reader into a dark place of thought. “Adventure” ...is a term that I regard highly from your perspective. Thank you once again.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 7, 2020
The title is a clue Why you are still in torment A sense of leftover regrets And without remorse of commenting sins
Its not your fault Just like Adam and Eve They were deceived Just like you
So salvation is always there For me ,others and most especially A lonely child with horrible visions Jesus is there with open arms
I see that in my dream vision .... A boy in white shirt and brown short Hugging tightly around Jesus
lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 11, 2020
Mr Kid, I'm an Atheist, although I do believe in Karma, an interesting insight into the journey of the soul....
Candykid, this world has a dark and a bright side. Our imagination sometimes goes overboard. Our Lord gives us the Holy Spirit to cast out these demons from our thoughts. Blessed be those who believe in him as you are. Enjoyed the write..SM
Comments (21)
Kathy
rob
This doesn't sound like you at all.
Anyways nice.... try
Stay blessed!
I hope than candy was woth it. regards, Liy
Why you are still in torment
A sense of leftover regrets
And without remorse of commenting sins
Its not your fault
Just like Adam and Eve
They were deceived
Just like you
So salvation is always there
For me ,others and most especially
A lonely child with horrible visions
Jesus is there with open arms
I see that in my dream vision ....
A boy in white shirt and brown short
Hugging tightly around Jesus