Yesterday I saw a wondrous sight As I walked about last night And looked up to the sky up high Stars sparkling like diamonds in the sky
Blinking, winking, dancing keeping time To the beat kept by father time The stage was set for the show to start As I wondered when it would start
A flash just seen did catch my eye. Over yonder way up there above my eye I turned and saw the opening scene Of comets screaming to be seen
Over, under the big bright moon. Dancing to the opening tune Of the opera about to play For all those lovers out that day
Warned by the crack of the distant thunder I searched about for the coming wonder There in the distance I saw the start Of the most wonderous part
There a small light of red, blue and green Started to grow into that ball that I gleaned On that wondrous diamond filled night Till it hid all those diamonds so bright
Spinning, swirling colours ever changing I watched as the dance kept evolving Until at last it’s brilliance did finally ebb Opening the way for the rest of the web,
How could I ever really know, How long I stood there watching the show? Played out for me in the dark sky With all those diamonds sparkling in my eye!
January 26, 2020
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2020
About this poem:
I was daydreaming about when I got home about 3:00 am and the sky started to get totally involved with the Northern Lights. So i took that thought and created this. I hope you enjoy.
Your wording choice of words Absolutely stunning Lovely choice of words Alaska much northern lights Purple lavender green Great rainbows Michigan lovely soothing sunsets Sunrises Gods paint pallet I want to read it 10 more times I want to buy it on a plaque On the wall w a picture of Northern Lights Rachael _0622
Rachael_0622Big lake, Alaska USAJan 28, 2020
Your wording choice of words Absolutely stunning Lovely choice of words Alaska much northern lights Purple lavender green Great rainbows Michigan lovely soothing sunsets Sunrises Gods paint pallet I want to read it 10 more times I want to buy it on a plaque On the wall w a picture of Northern Lights Rachael _0622
Thank you for your kind comments. You are welcome to use this poem on a plaque withe the lights as a background. if you do please advise perhaps I would want one.
It seems I am spending more time editing than Writing recently. Any way here is another that i just edited thanks to some feedback.
Rachael_0622Big lake, Alaska USAApr 22, 2020
Justarius I read your poem again today It touched my heart & soul in a new "special" way have you added to it? It felt brand new! Would like to buy a copy for the wall! Northern lights can be lovely & colorful n Alaska u want to reach for the stars The colors of green purple lavendar so divine! Fav Mmmm ... Rachael_0622
Comments (7)
Lovely choice of words
Alaska much northern lights
Purple lavender green
Great rainbows
Michigan lovely soothing sunsets
Sunrises
Gods paint pallet
I want to read it 10 more times
I want to buy it on a plaque
On the wall w a picture of
Northern Lights
Rachael _0622
Lovely choice of words
Alaska much northern lights
Purple lavender green
Great rainbows
Michigan lovely soothing sunsets
Sunrises
Gods paint pallet
I want to read it 10 more times
I want to buy it on a plaque
On the wall w a picture of
Northern Lights
Rachael _0622
Kathy
I read your poem again today
It touched my heart & soul
in a new "special" way
have you added to it?
It felt brand new!
Would like to buy a copy for the wall!
Northern lights can be lovely & colorful n Alaska u want to reach for the stars
The colors of green purple lavendar so divine!
Fav
Mmmm ...
Rachael_0622