Sunday week at 2pm

Do we arrive?
Screaming from the womb
Maybe to most
It hardly seems like
A fleeting moment ago
How the fruitless years
Take a vengeful toll
On many a wasted life
We should set a time to die
Like Sunday week at 2pm
And concentrate fully on living
Until then

How the nerve ends would sharpen
As each wasted moment annoyed
A little more than the one before
How the eyes would sparkle
When set before outrageous beauty
Then suddenly
Change to panic
At the wanting more

Would we be decisive?
About all our daily decisions
Or would we throw them away
Like old this and that
Where the sell by date
Lingered in the past

How would we choose?
Between this and that?
Would we try to please others?
Or seek a more obscure comfort
Hidden under a favourite hat

And when the appointed time came
Would we say?
I have far too much to do
I think I’ll leave it
For another week or two

Or
Would we be content?
By Sunday week at 2pm
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Posted: Feb 2020
About this poem:
Bit tongue in cheek, but there you have it

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salamuna
Loved the read Robert. we never know what would we say tomorrow ...true.. waiting for your next poem. x Lily teddybear
Candykid2
This myriad of words can be interpreted in so many ways. There is a great dichotomy of humor and seriousness woven within these passages....knowing you Rob, this is weighing heavily on the sarcastic side of the scale. I would only add a thought that I am already fully aware of that you surely would not be in agreement with. If there is a Creator of time, He surely is not limited by it, and would have full control to manipulate it at His will.....I will stick to the witty and humorous side, as I highly respect your own personal beliefs, as well as your outstanding skills in writing.thumbs up
yaspark
Enjoyed reading your poem Rob, it’s like encountering something special or sipping good old wine, you slow down to make It last longer and appreciate all the little sparkly details. I think you know to appreciate the “obscure comfort hidden under a favourite hat” no matter when Sunday week at 2pm.handshake
godsprincessonline today!
Trurobob: The motto is: Live each moment as though it is your last. This poem is very poignant for me as my step-great nephew had been killed while working on a recycle truck 4 years ago in Nov 2015. He was dumping recycle into the back of the truck when a car came up behind him - never slowed down - smashed him right into the back of the recycle truck - he had to be cremated. He was killed instantly - he never saw it coming. He was 26 years old.

I personally would not want to know. That is why we need to be ready at any moment when we are taken. Thanks for your insight and sharing this poem.

Kathy
teddybear
trurorob
Thanks Lily, I always try to live in the present.
Rob
southmiami4321online today!
Nice poem Rob. We truly have only the present to live, past gone..future uncertain. SM.
trurorob
Cheers Christian, your positive comments always welcome.
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Yana, astute thoughts
Rob
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,
Whether our end time is set or yet unknown, we should always
concentrate fully on living
Until then

Thanks for sharing this timely reminder! I’d choose to stay For another week or two, at least!
trurorob
Thanks Kathy
Rob
shadow1950
very reflective Rob enjoyed it I think we are seldom ready to take that final step lol hugsangel
Mizzy4
Hi Rob,
With a health history like mine I brushed with the end date a few times. My perspective on the matter is very carefree since.
Very thought provoking poem and well written as always.

Regards Mick.

wine
trurorob
Cheers Southmiami
Rob
EXRED3
wow i missed this one all true to BUT just 2pm Sunday no year grin
trurorob
Thanks Joy
Rob
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