Loved your beautiful song absolutely stunning soothing words Bathed in beauty & light (MBE) that's how it made me feel a warm comforting soothing place w love the secret Most imp relevant ingredient to the recipe of peace Made w a heart n soul Calm cool collective Balance comfort rest text work when it flows rest when needed kinda "Gentleman" We are both writers Yippie! Been typing quite awhile Thx for sharing much I want to read your poem about 10 more times A++++++++++ Superb Mmmm ... ! Fab fav read But u disappeared!
came for moments - disappeared I typed for hours U didnt respond for 6-7 days So intense in your own Unfinished business left behind Didn't finish what you started Ugh!
Rachael_0622
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Posted: Feb 2020
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came for moments - disappeared I typed for hours U didnt respond for 6-7 days So intense in your own Unfinished business left behind Didn't finish what u started Ugh!
If you have to be warned again about posting all this rambling crap on here which is not poetry, you will be reported to the moderators, 13 of the first page are yours you are not giving others a chance to be read. You have a right to post a poem but your rubbish is NOT poetry, do you not understand you are acting selfishly please try and act responsibly with CONSIDERATION for others. Most on here are far too polite to say anything, I am not. Rob
lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMar 5, 2020
Rachael, keep writing, but please don't "flood"
Rachael_0622OPBig lake, Alaska USAMar 5, 2020
I am trying to do much shorter poems Thx
lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMar 5, 2020
This means don't launch six or seven poems onto this Corner at once. No more than one (or two), at a time. Leave some time, between your posts. That is what "flooding" means...
If you are addressing your letters to one particular person - maybe private messaging would be better? Because I think some of your writing would be considered by the other person as private. Just saying...
Kathy
Rachael_0622OPBig lake, Alaska USAMar 8, 2020
Beethovens letter to his Immortal beloved Was shared to the world Of his admiration of her I highly recommend the movie For you to view that part R
MIWOF077Dallas, Texas USAMar 10, 2020
I want to believe the fact that her poems might be private yeah but I also feel it's not something to troll on her about. Ma'am please don't flood as being told before give your posts time.
Rachael_0622OPBig lake, Alaska USAMar 14, 2020
Kathy I don't care for your poems they are dark, uninspiring But u find reasons to be negative to me: I am a new poet I write w my heart U accuse me of flooding and say my poems r too personal Even though Beethoven and others love letters are published U try and troll me it is uncalled for It is called freedom of speech U block women to write u back in your profile but u have much to say about my poems But u allow no feedback to a response to you It's called freedom of speech Again I write w my heart Not all dark stories of rejection or not being given a chance You too deserve a chance for love to Bloom grow prosper do anything you want No matter what U need a real friend that can see your inner beauty God didn't make any Junk! Rachael
Comments (8)
You have a right to post a poem but your rubbish is NOT poetry, do you not understand you are acting selfishly please try and act responsibly with CONSIDERATION for others.
Most on here are far too polite to say anything, I am not.
Rob
Thx
Kathy
Immortal beloved
Was shared to the world
Of his admiration of her
I highly recommend the movie
For you to view that part
R
I don't care for your poems they are dark, uninspiring
But u find reasons to be negative to me: I am a new poet I write w my heart
U accuse me of flooding and say my poems r too personal
Even though Beethoven and others love letters are published
U try and troll me it is uncalled for
It is called freedom of speech
U block women to write u back in your profile but u have much to say about my poems
But u allow no feedback to a response to you
It's called freedom of speech
Again I write w my heart
Not all dark stories of rejection
or not being given a chance
You too deserve a chance for love to
Bloom grow prosper
do anything you want
No matter what
U need a real friend that can see your inner beauty
God didn't make any Junk!
Rachael