A Thousand Goodbye

Walking with you, talking
Smiling, hand in hand
I recall those days of ours
And how it all came to an end

You'd never known my heart
The million things it had for you
But soon came the day, I realised
My love was not enough for you

A peace breakup, was a great deal
That brimmed my eyes with tears
Pierced my heart with infinite thorns
Gone are the days, and so has the years

Just mist of faded memories linger
With time and again gone in flames
Nothing of feel is left to feel
Burning down, kissing flames

Dancing on thorns, it tickles my veins
No more pain is left to endure
Eyes drained, like draught of rain
I am out of breath to ensure

Living is no regret or sly guilt
Moments come and pass by
Lifting my spirit once more
I bid you, a thousand goodbye...


©Seema
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Posted: Mar 2020
About this poem:
A peaceful breakup by my boyfriend...the moment of feelings that I felt then.

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trurorob
I can taste the sentiment in this, enjoyed the read.
Rob
Simfj
Thank you Rob, glad you liked :)
chocoLuo
End is a fresh start.
Starting the fresh and sunshine life.
Say good bye to the heart-broken past.
Simfj
Thank you so much for the positive words, greatly appreciate it kiss
morgen90210
Hopefully its your last one (break-ups)
I learnt you get stronger with every new one
Break up only happens when we can't fix them or continue with the stress and pain

Its a hard learning curve but makes us better prepared .
Be among those that wants to cheer u up ..
Keep an open mind and heart
You never know what's coming
sad flower
WonderingLorax
I respect and appreciate the depth of emotion u feel. I would like to share more time having real interactions with those who can and do feel deeply. Please give me the chance to open my heart, and share who we are with each other. I am not in New Zealand nor Australia, but they are both places I too, have longed to be.
WonderingLorax
georgetheadore7@protonmail.com
To make a new friend
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