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by Candykid2Sterling, Virginia, USAMar 209 comments

War in Heaven

When God looks down upon me, just what does He see?...
A man that is righteous,...or at least tries to be?...
Or does He see things that I can’t imagine?...
I simply can’t fathom,....The Master’s reactions...

He’s said “In My Father’s house, there are many mansions”...
Imagine the compassion our Dear Father has fashioned...
It’s tragic for all those that do feel abandoned...
I’ll bet my sad life, ....there are no bad cabins...

There are those that will wonder why I write what is right...
Some will think I have no right to write light...
Few will still gaze at the truth with delight...
I’ll fight to the end,.... with all of my might...

I could choose to continue, but what would that do?...
Confuse the few that seem to know...”It’s not true”...
For those unsure of what to believe...
Just follow your heart,...pray you’re not deceived...

Now let’s go back to the top of this poem...
Would you reconsider......the words that I’ve sown?...
Or will you continue that tone that you own?...
God loves you beyond what you think He has shown.....
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Posted: Mar 20

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trurorobonline today!
Good write Christian, as you know its not for me but as poetry and a deep thinking subject I enjoyed the read.
Rob
lovecanberealonline today!
Thought provoking...
Candykid2
My goodness, an unexpected response from you Rob, I seriously appreciate your open mind and comments. I almost put a footnote in as a disclaimer ensuring that I would never try to change or convert anyone in any of their beliefs. I was actually thinking of you in particular, but then realized we are way beyond that. Thank you bro.
Candykid2
@ lovecanbereal..... I do believe this is the first comment that you have made on any of my writings.....I recall we had a brief disagreement with overall thoughts on a few subjects, but that was nothing. I do appreciate your brief and specific comment on this one. I do in fact read all of your writings, and of the the things that I have always admired about this site is the amazing array of different styles that everyone has in their word choice and compilations .....with yours being of no exception. Thank you friend.
godsprincessonline today!
Well Christian - looks like God is using you as a guiding light for those who do not believe. For in this corner conversation is going on and that is a good thing. Thank you for your faithfulness to our faith in your writes.

Kathy teddybear
Candykid2
Hello sweet Princess..... God has always used me to bring forth a portion of His complex plan. I love Him In every sense of the word, yet love has many definitions. He has said, “If you love me, keep my commandments. Here is where I fail the most....I am not happy in my sins, yet feel even more miserable trying to change a lifetime of behavior that consists of a killing diet. Your comments are taken straight to heart. And I do agree this is a subject that is worthwhile to discuss for anyone that has even the slightest inclination of wonderment. ......Thank you sweetness. purple heart
gnj4uonline today!
Hi, Candykid2,
My vision of heaven is a state of being far beyond war and its ravages. Your poem War in Heaven has an intriguing, oxymoronic title--its two opposite ideas joined to create an effect. When God looks down... what does He see? I hope goodness, light, good hearts, and good writes from people and poets who care. Thank you for sharing your light and your thought-provoking poem.
Candykid2
Hello Joy. While I believe there is not even one person that has, does, or ever will live here upon this earth that has never lied,.....I would run to the front of the line if ever questioned by the only One that truly has the right to inquire of such a sophisticated question, simply in an effort to declare my guilt. The title is deceiving. At this time, I choose not to disclose the true meaning of this admittedly misleading title. I bring up the topic of truth in response to your comments, complexly because I would be a liar again if I wouldn’t admit how much I admire said comments written by your very beautiful hands. Thank you Joy, you truly live up to your name in every possible way.
purple heart
salamunaonline today!
Excellent write Candykid. Thank you for sharing light with us. As about Heavens topic...
I understand that His plans are incomprehensible. but i really have serios doubts about His love for us















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