A Night in Newtown (circa 1987)

Damned by alcohol, our convict forebears;
Put a pub on ev'ry corner of old Newtown,
A night in Newtown - nothing compares -
(This suburb by its pubs, still has renown);-
Places for daydreams, and for quick affairs -
They are not formal - you don't need a ballgown;-
I can count at least five, or six, or seven;-
For drinkers, this is a kind of "God sent" heaven*.

This night a young man finds himself adrift,
In a big city - Sydney (to be exact);-
And from his mountain home - there is a rift;-
From what's familiar - he can't re-enact.
His former life - how reality does shift!,
Place and Time, and Time and Place react;-
So as to produce a strange perplexity;-
City life in all of its complexity.

A young man finds himself, at age eighteen,
In Newtown, in the dirty inner city.
A strange place, where things aren't as they seem;
(For a country lad, much more's the pity;-
In some ways knowing - although far too naive);-
So I must continue my poetic ditty,-
(By a ditty - I only mean these stanzas;-
Not the whole of life's extravaganzas).

My Newtown, (jaded Newtown) - an old whore;-
A faded jaded lady, down at heel,**
What you first see, you see, then so much more;
(Tonight reveals the bums, and the genteel);
Where students, derelicts, and junkies score;-
(She cloaks herself in night - so to reveal);-
Innocents find a fantasmagoria;-
If she had a ladies name - it be Gloria.

King Street winds, in serpentine complexity;
Like a river, down into St Peters;
Here you find every type of humanity,
From the wealthy, down to the Metho drinkers;***
Dulls the senses, of the night's black vanity;
A brilliant jewel, is to what this verse refers;
Australians, and other Nationalities,-
Into this melting pot now find finality?

The Beatles, and of Lucy's Sky with Diamonds;-
And how, at times, things seem like plasticine,
Trees, and palm trees, with their dark black fronds;
Lurched up before us like figures of glacine;
And paraded on the streets - the demimonde;
To Erskineville, we walked a dark ravine;
Through night's brocade - in all its strange regalia;-
To the bosom of the Rose of Australia.

Still, things seemed like an oddity we dreamed,
In this hotel Steve^, and I bought schooners,*****
The trip had not worn off (or so it seemed);
Overhead the full moon, white and lunar;
Silvery moonlight down upon us streamed;
I then wished I had finished my beer sooner;
As all about me patron's skeletons;
Were seen bereft of their clothe's curtains.******

It's not surprising, then, we fled the hotel,
And walked along the molten plastic streets;
Through Alexandria^^ - factories, and hovels;
Then, suddenly, the rain fell down in sheets;-
Before subsiding to a gentle drizzle;
Then we found ourselves on Boundary Street;
I said to Steve "I need to take a piss"
Beneath a street light - diamonds from my d*ck!

In this strange way, our trip came to an end;
(I think we walked back, but I can't recall);
"All's well, that ends well" ^^^- I can recommend;
You take a trip, or take one not at all;
Please yourself; although never do pretend;
That you have seen what I have seen - don't enthrall;-
Or guild your memories, with pretense false;-
Be honest now, and honest with your self.



© lovecanbereal
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Posted: Mar 2020
About this poem:
* Excluding the Lesbian, and Gay, pubs.
** It was, at this time, now quite expensive - and gentrified.
*** Old male alcoholics, on "skid row" drinking "metho" (methylated spirits).
**** A pub.
***** A measure of beer, (425 mL).
***** Somebody put something in my drink! (in a previous pub, I think it was that c*nt
Steve!).
^ My friend at the time, and about my age.

^^ Alexandria, Inner Sydney industrial suburb - now covered in home units
(apartments).
^^^ As Shakespeare said.
(Erskineville, and St Peter's are also inner Sydney suburbs).

The Rose of Australia ............. a pub

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Candykid2
In response, and out of respect for you having the courage to make a brief comment on my newly posted write, I feel it inappropriate to not reciprocate. Just be aware that I can be far too honest in my assessments. Nonetheless, it’s an interesting write, I am totally unaware of you and your history, or whether this is a work of pure fiction, or something you did experience in the year titled..... whichever the case, I found it a bit lengthy, but there were a few elements that stood out quite loud to me that I could certainly relate with. Nice job. thumbs up
lovecanbereal
Thanks, comment appreciated. Sometimes, it is harder to get the punctuation right, than the rhythm, and the meter.
lovecanbereal
I did live there, for about five, or six, years - when I was a student.
Candykid2
It’s all good. Punctuation, meter, word choice and count are very challenging to perfect. In fact, it is of my own personal belief that perfection is unattainable in writing, no matter how good a person thinks they master it in any given language.....especially English. I make mistakes constantly in my writings, most go unnoticed, some do not....One of the elements that I have put a lot of focus on is syllabic count,....that has probably been the most effective device that forces the reader to continue, rather than stop. It is tricky though, because if it is too forced, it will turn a reader away even quicker. In the end, all that matters is that you are happy with the PROCESS of writing, if other’s don’t like it,.......it is no loss on you.
lovecanbereal
Thanks, I think you are right there, with that analysis.
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