HEALING NATURE.

There's nothing like a swirling sea
Rough-energetic, turmoil to see
Wind adds drama, to coastal scene
Far across the harbour, cool green

Shoreline to hills, a natural frame
Contrasting scene, vibrant not tame
Swooping seabirds, haunting eerie sound
Feeling of being isolated, on rocky ground

Noisy moments pass, in erratic rush
Swamped by sea-spray, soak not crush
Nature enhanced, negative turmoil
Released thoughts, mind uncoils

In time nature can heal, once again
Splatter of spray, releases pain
To carefully walk, away in peace
Mixed emotions fade, as trauma cease......

Nature a healer, after exposure to sea
Watching movement, as wind blows free
Rough raw beauty, nature acts as host
As evening closes in, grey becomes a ghost
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Posted: Apr 2020
About this poem:
A scene can change from peaceful to violent.....nature must be respected....

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Comments (2)

Candykid2
Thanks for your response. I would not consider Adverbs “wasteful,” and I would certainly never try to change your style of writing. This is an open forum where and when anything gets posted by any writer, they have chosen to accept responses of all types, even if they are not in agreement with said responses. I am happy that you write for the love of the PROCESS,......and that is all that matters.
niah9
Let's just say candykid, we agree to disagree..because we all have our own style...right or wrong it's ours....
Kathy NZwave
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