old cars and rusted hearts

the cafe was closing
and the air was darker
than age
Mary was fixing
her order
and her world
had become
like a cage


will you still see me
on Sunday?
will you wear that dress
and look nice..?
but you know
that a question
ain't a question
when you
got to ask it twice..

and the sparrows
still play
in the cornfields
where we used
to make love
and you'd sing..

ain't it funny
how something
is nothing
when nothing
was once everything?

I drove down there
around midnight
past farms
that seemed
to be free

but I knew
one day
that I'd buy one
and that
would be the end
of me

talk of music
and college
of dance halls
lawyers and gown
but it's hard
to dance with a roughneck
when a banker's hand
owns town


she was getting tired
of me
my work, my car
and my dark
and I looked to the heavens
for answers
and saw nothing but stars
and a lark

"I heard she married a doctor"
my friend Dave
did say
later on

and I smiled
like it meant
nothing to me
and got sick
when I knew
he was gone

now the sparrows still sing
in the cornfields
neath the mountains
where she
used to sing

aint it funny
how something
is nothing
when nothing
was once everything

and her car, her car
is a dream.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2020

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godsprincess
You are a very good story spinner - thanks for sharing Ru.

Kathy teddybear
salamuna
Hi Ru. I do enjoy your story..not so many of our good poets are posting anything here in last days...maybe because the "air is darker than age". ....waiting for your new ballade. stay well.Lilywave
trurorob
Great poem RU, very clever title, it ran like a seamless story but always in gear
Rob
Rachael_0622
Yachtsman_7
Hi I enjoyed your poem
We get busy
Change happens
The
Earth keeps spinning in its orbit
Farms & work keeps us busy
Before you know it
Poof a lot of time has elapsed
And you wonder if things had evolved differently
If that old love
Would have could have should have
Been the love of
Our life ...
But no they became anothers
Because they couldn't wait forever ...
They needed someone to love hold
Lingering thoughts
Of the one that got away
Rachael_0622peace teddybear bouquet sad flower
candykid
A work of art. I will not go into great detail, but the two first thoughts that came to mind were the lyrics from 'Red Barchetta' by RUSH, and 'Tomorrow' by Morrissey.... Great poetic diversity here.thumbs up
yachtsman_7
Thank you Kathy,

Hope thís finds you safe and well,

Ru
yachtsman_7
Always good to hear from you Lily,

I guess with the extra time available, I should post new stuff. You got me thinking Lily. Have a great day, and please be safe.


Ru
yachtsman_7
Thanks Rob,

Please look after yourself. This awful thing seems to be taking all the folks I look up to.

Ru
ReaderOfSouls
Love this, Ru! cowboy I like how you threw my name in there. laugh *Throws a playful rope loop around you and pulls you closer* How *ARE* you? Are you staying safe and well? How about your family? I have about a gahzillion (is that even a word?) questions for you. :-)

:Warm Hug: hug heart wings
doglover14
Ru ~
Such a truly touching write.

My mind can't stop repeating your words:
"something
is nothing
when nothing
was once everything"

I think perhaps they will be imbedded within me for eternity.

Keep safe ~ Madyteddybear
gnj4u
Hi, yatchsman_7,
Had doglover14 not already high-lighted your poem’s lines quoted, I would have. Exquisite! Though the cars may be old, with so much emotion traveling through it, this poem’s heart pumps without a trace of rust. Thanks for sharing.
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