the cafe was closing and the air was darker than age Mary was fixing her order and her world had become like a cage
will you still see me on Sunday? will you wear that dress and look nice..? but you know that a question ain't a question when you got to ask it twice..
and the sparrows still play in the cornfields where we used to make love and you'd sing..
ain't it funny how something is nothing when nothing was once everything?
I drove down there around midnight past farms that seemed to be free
but I knew one day that I'd buy one and that would be the end of me
talk of music and college of dance halls lawyers and gown but it's hard to dance with a roughneck when a banker's hand owns town
she was getting tired of me my work, my car and my dark and I looked to the heavens for answers and saw nothing but stars and a lark
"I heard she married a doctor" my friend Dave did say later on
and I smiled like it meant nothing to me and got sick when I knew he was gone
now the sparrows still sing in the cornfields neath the mountains where she used to sing
aint it funny how something is nothing when nothing was once everything
Hi Ru. I do enjoy your story..not so many of our good poets are posting anything here in last days...maybe because the "air is darker than age". ....waiting for your new ballade. stay well.Lily
Great poem RU, very clever title, it ran like a seamless story but always in gear Rob
Rachael_0622Big lake, Alaska USAApr 15, 2020
Yachtsman_7 Hi I enjoyed your poem We get busy Change happens The Earth keeps spinning in its orbit Farms & work keeps us busy Before you know it Poof a lot of time has elapsed And you wonder if things had evolved differently If that old love Would have could have should have Been the love of Our life ... But no they became anothers Because they couldn't wait forever ... They needed someone to love hold Lingering thoughts Of the one that got away Rachael_0622
A work of art. I will not go into great detail, but the two first thoughts that came to mind were the lyrics from 'Red Barchetta' by RUSH, and 'Tomorrow' by Morrissey.... Great poetic diversity here.
yachtsman_7OPDublin, IrelandApr 16, 2020
Thank you Kathy,
Hope thís finds you safe and well,
Ru
yachtsman_7OPDublin, IrelandApr 16, 2020
Always good to hear from you Lily,
I guess with the extra time available, I should post new stuff. You got me thinking Lily. Have a great day, and please be safe.
Ru
yachtsman_7OPDublin, IrelandApr 16, 2020
Thanks Rob,
Please look after yourself. This awful thing seems to be taking all the folks I look up to.
Love this, Ru! I like how you threw my name in there. *Throws a playful rope loop around you and pulls you closer* How *ARE* you? Are you staying safe and well? How about your family? I have about a gahzillion (is that even a word?) questions for you. :-)
:Warm Hug:
doglover14hudson, New York USAApr 28, 2020
Ru ~ Such a truly touching write.
My mind can't stop repeating your words: "something is nothing when nothing was once everything"
I think perhaps they will be imbedded within me for eternity.
Hi, yatchsman_7, Had doglover14 not already high-lighted your poem’s lines quoted, I would have. Exquisite! Though the cars may be old, with so much emotion traveling through it, this poem’s heart pumps without a trace of rust. Thanks for sharing.
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Kathy
Rob
Hi I enjoyed your poem
We get busy
Change happens
The
Earth keeps spinning in its orbit
Farms & work keeps us busy
Before you know it
Poof a lot of time has elapsed
And you wonder if things had evolved differently
If that old love
Would have could have should have
Been the love of
Our life ...
But no they became anothers
Because they couldn't wait forever ...
They needed someone to love hold
Lingering thoughts
Of the one that got away
Rachael_0622
Hope thís finds you safe and well,
Ru
I guess with the extra time available, I should post new stuff. You got me thinking Lily. Have a great day, and please be safe.
Ru
Please look after yourself. This awful thing seems to be taking all the folks I look up to.
Ru
:Warm Hug:
Such a truly touching write.
My mind can't stop repeating your words:
"something
is nothing
when nothing
was once everything"
I think perhaps they will be imbedded within me for eternity.
Keep safe ~ Mady
Had doglover14 not already high-lighted your poem’s lines quoted, I would have. Exquisite! Though the cars may be old, with so much emotion traveling through it, this poem’s heart pumps without a trace of rust. Thanks for sharing.