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by gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts, USAApr 1913 comments

Spinning and Spooning

Regardless of life circumstance
We all spin
in the same orbit
and lay our heads down
at day’s end.

When bodies touch
nestled like spoons
companionship stacked safely
away from forks and knives
now unused

cuddling gleams
with brightness
as polished silver
reflects light
near and afar...

precious metals
shining together
like the creamer
when it spies
its sugar-mate.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 19
About this poem:
“We all spin in the same orbit” from one of Rachael_0622 poems* and her comment that one of candleinthewind’s poems** struck a note with its line “no one to cuddle” inspired me to write this poem.

* “Love hungry ripe ready to reciprocate”
** “Candle in the wind...”

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yachtsman_7online today!
"cuddling gleams
with brightness
as polished silver
reflects light
near and afar."


Hi gnj4u,

Such a clever and creative line. I really enjoyed your metaphor and poem.

Best wishes,
(and please stay safe)

Ru
Rachael_0622online now!
Gnj4u

Thank u for including me
Had the lonleys lately from isolation
I don't see it coming to A conclusion
Jeese can't even go to church
This too shall pass
Rachael_0622
gnj4u
Hi, yatchsman_7, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so nicely on my poem. You are a master of the metaphor; so, I am pleased that you liked mine. Hi, Rachael_0622, Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. I hope it provided some comfort against the isolation we all are enduring over these pandemic weeks of days.
Rachael_0622online now!
Tears tears tears
Spooning
Miss spooning rubbing his thigh
With forks and knives no longer used
Hugs no longer used
Ugh
Rachael_0622
ReaderOfSoulsonline today!
Free form and yet such great detail!

I love it! wine heart wings
gnj4u
Hi, ReaderOfSouls,
It's nice to "see" you again. During yesteryears when I used to make it into Poet's Corner more frequently, I always loved reading your wonderful posts. Thank you for reading and offering such a nice comment about mine. It is much appreciated.
candykidonline today!
I think it beautiful what you have written. I think it even more beautiful while I perceive your thoughts. However it may be in the end, it matters not. Quickness of emotion often results in an even quicker slowness of ability to respond appropriately...I will stand first, not for attention, I will stand last, out of shame with even the slightest degree of guilt. In other words..... You may stand somewhat alone, you are not.......Efff, Joy. You consistently exhibit a truly rare Christ-like attribute.........you are a Peacemaker. What a beautiful gift to be bestowed upon a person....I get agitated like any other, in the end........I cannot match your words...You have proven yourself superior to me so many times that it is simply incalculable.....Rachael....You have just witnessed the true......take it as you may, be wise not to abuse it...

Christian
gnj4u
Hi, candy kid,
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment on my poetic offering. I am pleased you found some beauty in it. When a poem is written, it belongs to the poet. Once shared, it is out of his/her control. The impact a poem has on the reader is independent from and, arguably, could be more important than the poet’s intentions. Whereas my intentions always arise from a place of love, we all know about destinations and intentions.
ReaderOfSoulsonline today!
gnj4u,

It is good to be back and to read your words once more. I've missed your works and your kind spirit. hug heart wings cowboy
DK1001
A nice piece. We do all spin gnu and gravity shares our circadian rhythms.

I had intended to read your poetry until I discovered you had 113 haha!
Thanks for sharingdancing
hedistuff
Hello. It's good to know there's still a few old characters around. Yes, that means you Joy. One of my favorite characters...hedi
gnj4u
Hi, DK1001, Thank you for taking the time to read and your nice comment on my poem. Although I don’t post much anymore, I do keep writing, a lot—especially during this pandemic. But, as I’ve been told, quantity does not equal quality. Hi, hedistuff, Thanks for reading my poem. Although I don’t know what you think of my poem, I am happy to (still be alive, and) be considered one of your favorite characters. Right back at you!
marina1000
Enjoyed reading it Gnj4u thumbs up Thank you :)
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