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salamuna
by salamunaDeventer, Overijssel, NetherlandsApr 218 comments

Fantasy

Tender music,
Burning candles
Quiet conversation
Of two of us.
Flowering tree branches
Behind the windows,
Smell of roses
And wine..
Will it happen again?
It is hard to imagine
Sad fantasies
Dust on an abandoned vase,
Empty chairs......
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Posted: Apr 21
About this poem:
Just current mood.....

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yachtsman_7online today!
Mood is like weather Lily,

Subject to fluctuation. But the quality of the vase remains.

Best,
Ru
gnj4u
Hi, salamuna,
Dust on an abandoned vase,
Empty chairs......

Dust and empty, coupled, convey a long-felt loss. There may be sadness in the moment; but the
Tender music,
Burning candles

fantasies seem quite lovely as does your poignant poem. And, I wish to second yatchsman_7’s astute comments. Thank you for sharing.
salamuna
Thank a lot Ru and gnj4u for your understanding. Very much appreciated. Lily wave
godsprincessonline today!
You paint a beautiful picture Lily but then it turns into such a sad picture. Take care and stay safe!

Kathy teddybear
Nuwahri61
Reflection ...... always a lovely thought and to put to paper even better .....regards Nu grin
trurorobonline today!
Positivity is the key Lily, but a nice write, hope should overcome despair.
Rob x
salamuna
Kathy , thank you so much for your lovely comment. True it was a sad moment is April. All is going well now. Lily heart wings
Hi Nu, it s always a great pleasure to get comment from you. Thank you so much for your understanding. Lily wave
Robert, my friend, my poem was written in April. So it s ok now. Thanks for stopping by. Lily heart wings
Yankee4you
I like this. How you create a mood with the senses and seemingly unconnected observations.......
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