Love of water The Carolina beaches calling me home!
Landlord from The North Banks Of the Carolinas said,
"I heard about people like you! Always wanted to meet one like you!"
"You kept your word To keep this place clean! You were here for a year The carpet is spotless Emaculate! Oh Wow! I won't have to replace it This place is ready to go To be rented right this second For a new tenant To view, lease & move in Today God, you Are Good! A little petite old Jewish Woman shrewd and wise Owner of Wise Potato chips Ethical in business When the house had a delay She paid for another months rent at the beach! The beach place was adorable quaint Because I had already signed the lease Paid the deposit and First months rent She was gracious But a powerhouse Not one to reckon with!
The appliances are clean Not a scratch on the counter How did u do that?"
I put table runners Under the canisters And appliances I left it as I found it Respecting Her property My Love nest Not a house But a home
We left the shoes at the door To not tear up the floor To come no more?
The sand was not invited in So we patted our shoes together To knock off the sand So the wind can Cooperate to return To blow it back to the beach To where it originated Belongs Once was a home for ocean critters a shell No longer needed but pulverized to dust sand For the shells got crushed to turn them into sand That's how Mother Nature Cleans up the beach Like a tumbler That the ocean waves and wind Purified cleansed the beach
When we returned home So we tapped our shoes Outside For the sand to not enter in Too close to the Ocean
Tons of sand from beaches here To not act like a diamond With 8 cut edges to Tear up the carpet Sand is abrasive It blows in the wind Polishing everything it touches Like mother natures Sand blaster To get rid of soil debris
Where A Duet of Two love birds Rested Cuddled spooned & Called it home While they We're swinging on their swing Perched on a branch Founded a home Made a life She gave me the most Beautiful Written Reference I Ever Owned
& My entire deposit returned Immediately right there on the spot!
With Love Rachael_0622
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Posted: May 2020
About this poem:
Emaculate house Deposit back On the spot at inspection Even the garage spotless! Landlord ecstatic joyous happy! I miss the ocean beach very much Clean dry pavement No snow No black ice Don't miss snakes or reptiles You see them migrate during broad daylight to the run off ponds in residential areas or canal ditches Mammoth Snakes cross roads to get to ponds I miss deboned barbecued chicken on a stick with spinach & cheese Chick filet sea shells summer clothes house dresses A C is needed in the Southern states & Alaska drought fires Last summer very hot drought fires
I left the house in Emaculate condition I left it very clean Appliances spotless Deposit back On the spot at inspection Even the garage spotless! Landlord ecstatic joyous happy! Rachael_0622
It's quite simply really. My time is valuable, I am offering an oppurtunity that you have a choice to either accept or not. Make your decision and cast out any fears.
20 minutes has been granted for what should have been a simple one word answer, Incapability solidifies incapability. Research the definition of Poetry, and while you attempt to learn, apply those newly-learned elements if you happen to come to the realization of suggested true definition, in which many debate, yet far fewer do not.
Rachael_0622OPBig lake, Alaska USAMay 4, 2020
Candy kid U r not welcome in my world U r evil sick kid Do not contact me Ever Again!
Rachael_0622OPBig lake, Alaska USAMay 4, 2020
Candy kid U r not welcome in my world U r evil sick kid Do not contact me Ever Again!
Rachael_0622OPBig lake, Alaska USAMay 4, 2020
Candykid You obviously have Amnesia To the evil you dish out to people Go away
SOG157Buffalo / NiagaraFalls, New York USASep 10, 2020
what beautiful story-poem, very touching- a truly wonderful read. I now will read again. ty for sharing
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 12, 2020
Racheal forgive me for as i read your piece I also have a similiar line of thought with Candykid Maybe this is a rare kind of poetry A bit confusing and narrative to the end
But honest as i shall be As countless times with others ive been Even I myself have written terrible poems So as i said .. its not like a poem
SOG157Buffalo / NiagaraFalls, New York USAJan 25, 2021
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Appliances spotless
Deposit back
On the spot at inspection
Even the garage spotless!
Landlord ecstatic joyous happy!
Rachael_0622
U r not welcome in my world
U r evil sick kid
Do not contact me Ever Again!
U r not welcome in my world
U r evil sick kid
Do not contact me Ever Again!
You obviously have Amnesia
To the evil you dish out to people
Go away
I also have a similiar line of thought with Candykid
Maybe this is a rare kind of poetry
A bit confusing and narrative to the end
But honest as i shall be
As countless times with others ive been
Even I myself have written terrible poems
So as i said .. its not like a poem