If all the sharp stars, fell down from up high, from spaces beyond deep blue skies... Would you even try, to catch at least one, or stare glaring as each star dies?... Might you doubt that I, care not for my sight, I'd stare at the sky until you... View blue's truest blues, through night's true blue hues, bright minds sometime see more than eyes...
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Dark skies display stars, honed by the Sun's rays, sight gone, yet now I can see... More clear than I ever, I pray that you never, stop shining your light down on me... At times and on days, in ways brightly blaze, star-points pierce through the night's shades... And I've felt the pain of your stars from the start, sharp blades fiercely pierce while they play....
Hi, candykid, With only the tildes separating them, this poem’s two sections pass bright energy back and forth between as their words play with image and sight. Though sharp blades fiercely pierce while they play...., the choice is made to stare at the sky until you...View blue's truest blues, through night's true blue hues...Starpiercer leaves readers, amidst sharp stars and their star-points that pierce night skies, to ponder Would you even try, to catch at least one? Thank you for sharing this delightful write.
Hi there Candykid, Long time no see... I love your poem and especially your ever unique style of writing. Your imagination never fails to impress. I hope all is well.
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Kathy
With only the tildes separating them, this poem’s two sections pass bright energy back and forth between as their words play with image and sight. Though sharp blades fiercely pierce while they play...., the choice is made to stare at the sky until you...View blue's truest blues, through night's true blue hues... Starpiercer leaves readers, amidst sharp stars and their star-points that pierce night skies, to ponder Would you even try, to catch at least one? Thank you for sharing this delightful write.
Long time no see...
I love your poem and especially your ever unique style of writing. Your imagination never fails to impress.
I hope all is well.
Kind regards.
Mick.