{Every single day I wake feeling low and down Somethings telling me, the way it needs to be With no faith in love and lust, she came into my life She liked me as I am and accepted all my flaws I gave it all to you made you special number one Now I’m stuck between two worlds, one where you still here Back in my own time this feeling cant unwind too near}
{Have you ever in your heart, seen a light so bright its clear Feeling colors seeing it load, this connection brings to tear I knew you were the one, you told me not to fear I believed you when you said, always I will love you feel it here}
{Knowing is the key, I can see how they treat me I’m never the one able, to be what she needs of me This enables them giving to rite easy into leaving flight You promised when to me, he was a distant memory}
{On that happy day you ask me could you go After making love all day I wanted you to say On that happy day I should have held you tight in sight On that happy day I gave you your own way On that happy day it echoes make you stay}
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Posted: Sep 2020
About this poem:
i tried to write a song, now i need someone to sing it
Comments (8)
wish i could write music but it would probably a sad note maybe a A, i dont know is that rite.
I can make beats and electronic music on my computer
if anyone and sing it i would love to hear how it sounds
Something sad, melancholic, cheerful?
A ballad? A pop song?
For me, if I were to write a song, I would need to find a melody on the piano first, then the words will come along.
Or..maybe on the guitar it would be easier?
i like tunes that are upbeat but has a sad vocal with melodic synths long breaks.
good build ups. to mixed feelings of joy and heartache
good baseline aswell
I'm not a pro!
I like improvising and playing by ear...when I'm inspired.
For your song, I would need to sit with you as I would find it difficult on my own. Then I could sing it when I know how.
I have a beat in mind, need to get it out of my mind onto the pc