Standing on the waters edge, thoughts jumbled mind Seek answers to questions, in the jumble try to find Do you need too, or is the reason so obviously clear Maybe you can't accept, from those you hold dear
Red flags, we all sense them but try to ignore Until the dawning moment, we can do no more To bury and consider, a reason that is safe Instead of acting quickly, close an open gate
Did you wait for peace of mind, to overcome When a relationship is toxic, commonsense wrong Still hope burns strong, yet doubts take control Time to accept, bring peace to your inner soul
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Posted: Sep 2020
About this poem:
Giving benefit of the doubt, until you can no more.......comes in many formats...love....friendship....family....
TueAnHà Noi, Mekon River Delta VietnamSep 19, 2020
???????????? I really like your poem. Our country Vietnam has had to go through wars against China. Japan. France. America. We only officially became independent on April 30, 1975. I am very proud of being a bloodline heroic country of Vietnam. I love all life. I love peace. Thanks you ???????????? - Tue An - ????????????
captabel69Johannesburg, Gauteng South AfricaSep 19, 2020
You're right on point. Nothing should surpass your inner peace.
niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandSep 20, 2020
Thank you TueAn.....for both ready and leaving a comment......appreciated.....Kathy NZ.....
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Our country Vietnam has had to go through wars against China. Japan. France. America. We only officially became independent on April 30, 1975.
I am very proud of being a bloodline heroic country of Vietnam.
I love all life. I love peace.
Thanks you
???????????? - Tue An - ????????????