I’m just sitting here Waiting for the tide Knocked off early No place I’d rather hide There’s a howling easterly Whitecaps everywhere But it’s very soothing So I thought I’d share I’m perched on driftwood Ten feet long Surrounded by a forest That doesn’t belong Coal ships sit Thirty miles out All in a line Waiting for a shout There’s people riding And walking along The harbour wall It attracts a throng The sea is A deep blue green And far too the south The coal terminal can be seen Kite surfers enjoy All that they can Billowing coloured sails All part of the plan There’s a race happening Along the beach As the dad chases Kids out of reach Lifesavers are packing up It’s time call it a day As the ink just falls From my pen today I’ll just sit For a little longer Enjoy what’s left To make me stronger Drink this beautiful Part of the world in To soothe the soul And polish my grin .......
It seems I am right next to you on that driftwood, watching all the scenery, hearing the moving waves, catching the human life all around. Enjoyed this write Nuwah, beautiful descriptions in your poem, made my day. Thanks for sharing
Hi Lily ......... It is a very beautiful place here ....... you have amazing coastline dotted with islands and then you have the rural aspect with the ranges to the west and it is still relatively small in population although I do believe that is changing quickly ......... Thanks for the kind words .....Regards Nu
OceanzestHamilton, Waikato New ZealandSep 28, 2020
There's a howling Easterly, there's coal ships that want to bring material to pollute the planet, and there is some predator chasing kids down the beach, Nu are you sure you are enjoying yourself?
Hi, Nuwahri61, There’s a howling easterly Whitecaps everywhere But it’s very soothing Even when tumultuous, nature can have the power to distract and soothe. Thanks for sharing your reflections on your South Wall Blues............
Hi Oceanzest Yeah mate just chillin so pretty unfazed by it all ....... anytime near the ocean is better than work unless your working on it ..... Regards Nu
Hi Nu! Awesome poem as always! My husband use to share this moments with me...he's been too busy at work and he now goes to the beach to escape coming home so he doesn't have to spend more time with me, it's just my hunch!
Amazing is the word for this poem Nu! What a beautiful and special and private moment you had there; shared to your poet friends...I am glad I had a peek here or I would have never known.
@SALAMUNA It is a very beautiful place here indeed (if you like the heat)....... Mr Nu is trying very hard to show you the "amazing coastline dotted with islands and then you have the rural aspect with the ranges to the West and it is still relatively small in population although I believe that is changing quickly" and yes, Thanks for your KIND WORDS... Poet Nu seems always aware how KIND you're words are in all your comments (honestly, I often have to re-read the other comments because they read and sound just as kind to me ) One day I might understand but at the moment I really don't.
@SouthM: Our connection was only brief; I respect you! You seem to care about how people feel! Thank you for always supporting my husband's poetry!
@Joy...thank you Joy for always supporting my husband's poetry. It sure is always a pleasure to see and read comments from poets I know when I drop by. I only see Rob and Morgen now and then from all the poets we use to know in the old days.
@Kathy (US), likewise Kathy; always lovely to read your comments and see how you are supporting my husband's poetry in here. And I will always be grateful for being kind to me :-) God bless; stay safe
@Oceanzest: Thanks for supporting Nu's poetry; missing NZ like hell mate! And being made to feel you're out of placed while you are feeling stuck doesn't help.
By the way Nu didn't mention as he can't see it from the wall; but there is actually a bridge on the way there and at sunrise or sundown it gives the most amazing view! I might end up there if this wind doesn't blow away!
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKOct 2, 2020
I sooooo enjoyed reading this very descriptive delightful poem, you took me on a relaxing enjoyable little journey and it was a tonic for my soul. Thanks for sharing it with us all..continue to enjoy your surroundings and stay well
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Kathy
Glad I could share this experience with you and you could feel the simplicity of this write ...... appreciate you stopping by .....Regards Nu
There’s a howling easterly
Whitecaps everywhere
But it’s very soothing
Even when tumultuous, nature can have the power to distract and soothe. Thanks for sharing your reflections on your South Wall Blues............
Yeah mate just chillin so pretty unfazed by it all ....... anytime near the ocean is better than work unless your working on it ..... Regards Nu
Totally agree ....... mesmerising to say the least....... Thanks for stopping by .......Regards Nu
Amazing is the word for this poem Nu! What a beautiful and special and private moment you had there; shared to your poet friends...I am glad I had a peek here or I would have never known.
@SALAMUNA It is a very beautiful place here indeed (if you like the heat)....... Mr Nu is trying very hard to show you the "amazing coastline dotted with islands and then you have the rural aspect with the ranges to the West and it is still relatively small in population although I believe that is changing quickly" and yes, Thanks for your KIND WORDS... Poet Nu seems always aware how KIND you're words are in all your comments (honestly, I often have to re-read the other comments because they read and sound just as kind to me ) One day I might understand but at the moment I really don't.
@SouthM: Our connection was only brief; I respect you! You seem to care about how people feel! Thank you for always supporting my husband's poetry!
@Joy...thank you Joy for always supporting my husband's poetry. It sure is always a pleasure to see and read comments from poets I know when I drop by. I only see Rob and Morgen now and then from all the poets we use to know in the old days.
@Kathy (US), likewise Kathy; always lovely to read your comments and see how you are supporting my husband's poetry in here. And I will always be grateful for being kind to me :-) God bless; stay safe
@Oceanzest: Thanks for supporting Nu's poetry; missing NZ like hell mate! And being made to feel you're out of placed while you are feeling stuck doesn't help.
By the way Nu didn't mention as he can't see it from the wall; but there is actually a bridge on the way there and at sunrise or sundown it gives the most amazing view! I might end up there if this wind doesn't blow away!
Thanks for sharing it with us all..continue to enjoy your surroundings and stay well
I think you set the cat amongst the pidgeons there .........no need for concern tho all above board ....... he he love Nu
Thanks for stopping by ....... much appreciated ......Regards Nu