It’s low tide And a light northeaster Cools down the last of the day The evening hues begin to reveal themselves Reflecting off the wet sand and down onto the tiny surf And although the sun had left the beach It still shines bright on the majestic island just a kilometre or so offshore Highlighting the green of the scrub The yellow of sand coloured rock And the chocolate brown of the surrounding tidal rocks This sitting in a sea of light blue is astounding The northern harbour wall is split evenly in two with the dark brown of tidal mark and the silvery grey of the armour rock Puffs of random apricot clouds drift listlessly As the dropping sun paints the opposite ends of the earth and amazing lilac and grey What artist can reach from one end of earth to the other A young child wearing but her skin frolics in the sand resisting her mother’s calls As a lone tinny makes his way back to the harbour As the nesting plovers ward off the presence of a hawk lingering And so the afternoon ends ......
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Posted: Dec 2020
About this poem:
Been finding hard to express myself lately ....... l have been trying just to write freely as I see it
This is a beautiful poem Nuwah. Just as a painter guides his brush seeing the sunset your sight captures its beauty with your writing. Enjoyed this. SM
Hi, nuwarhi61, ...hues begin to reveal themselves...green of the scrub...yellow of sand colored rock...chocolate brown...tidal rocks...in a sea of light blue.... Thanks for painting your 'one afternoon' in this lovely poem that revels in beauty to ward off the presence of a hawk lingering.
Hi Joy ....... Thanks for the comments ...... I am not sure how this posted as I was editing the end and fell asleep and awoke the next morning already delivered go figure ????? Such is life ha ha ......Regards Nu
Excellent descriptive write Nu, A poet with a keen eye for detail. Really great to see some original members still posting...The corner has lost the 'Family Feel' it once had. Regards Mick.
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...hues begin to reveal themselves...green of the scrub...yellow of sand colored rock...chocolate brown...tidal rocks...in a sea of light blue.... Thanks for painting your 'one afternoon' in this lovely poem that revels in beauty to ward off the presence of a hawk lingering.
A poet with a keen eye for detail.
Really great to see some original members still posting...The corner has lost the 'Family Feel' it once had.
Regards Mick.