Traffic Jam

by Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland, Australia

Mar 2021 489 Views 14 comments

Traffic Jam .......

Sitting on the corner
Watching the poems go by
Brings memories of times
When the traffic was so high
You’d post in the morning
And by night you would return
To search for your write
And comments to learn
But alas your words were gone
Down the avenue
And the poems had built up
The queue very long .........

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Posted: Mar 2021

About this poem:

Good to see the traffic on the corner moving along albeit a little slow but steadily ticking over ......

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Comments (14)

OceanzestHamilton, Waikato New ZealandMar 18, 2021

Interesting thing is Nu, is that I'm on AllPoetry.com and I never get more than about 60 -100 reads supposedly on the biggest and busiest poetry site on the planet. Every poem gets posted for all to read so its not just selected followers reading. Here you can achieve the same if not more which is truly amazing.
Mind you on AllPoetry there is a new poem about every 10 seconds :)

Abby1963California, USAMar 18, 2021

Sweet memories. We all made together

online today!

salamunaDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsMar 19, 2021

Hi Nu. Right words.. I can see by the number of views of our best poets from time ago. how high the traffic was..a lot of the bests left us or stopped writing...it s so pitty...Hope you are doing well and go on writing. Regards, Lily

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 19, 2021

Hi Nu,

The corner is ever changing....but I think it makes things interesting. The important thing is that it provides a platform for expression.
Keep writing.

Regards Mick.

LaceyQueen21Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMar 19, 2021

Hi Nu

I also remember how quickly our poems used to go down the queue, though times have changed, it is always good to read enjoy other's poems and support/encourage each other.. something that wont change hopefully
Thanks for sharing..