"Now Listen Up! you maggots you pimple-arsed poetry wannabe's sitting there in your chocolate sprinkled candy cone bedrooms writing about how your boyfriend doesn't call or By the light of the Silvery Moon, Let me tell you that's all bullshit, Bull Shit! I want you to write like a flare just ripped open the northern sky there's enemy fire from the ridge and you're so far down in the rocks you're sucking in the dust of the afterlife. Do you understand me?" "Yes Drill Sergeant" "I want you to write it pierced and thorned and with every aching sinew I can taste the road to deliverance. Do you understand me?" "Yes Drill Sergeant" "DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME?" "YES DRILL SERGEANT" "Now write something that dignifies your putrid existence, I want your mothers smiling with every waking sunrise" "Yes Drill Sergeant"
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Posted: Mar 2021
About this poem:
reading too many self-piteous juvenile poems on another site
Comments (2)
I hope you posted this on the site mentioned... it might ignite their imaginations.
Regards Mick.