When I met you first

J14762

by J14762Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India

Apr 2021 307 Views 5 comments

When I met you first

Author: J14762

When I met you first
To love you was my thirst
I love in such a way
That none has a word to say
But see the greatest lover on his way
To meet his partner in the bay
Birds fly high and days roll by
But I stand here dusk and dawn
Waiting for you to come and join

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Posted: Apr 2021

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Comments (5)

volo74

volo74___, West Midlands, England UKApr 3, 2021

Solar!!!

southmiami4321

southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAApr 3, 2021

Nice write. Sometimes we need to make things happen, if it does not come then after that it was not meant to be. SM

Mizzy4

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandApr 3, 2021

A long story in abbreviated words.
Nicely written.

Regards Mick.

LaceyQueen21

LaceyQueen21Norwich, Norfolk, England UKApr 3, 2021

Hi J14762.. welcome to Poets Corner

Enjoyed your poem..

DukeOfNugget

DukeOfNuggetVegas, Nevada USAApr 17, 2021

Only waiting is considered unproductive. This creates enormous opportunity costs, which accumulate over time. Get back to work!

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