A Lovers Lament..
The pain of love.. what can I write,
To warn about this 'thing',
Its beauty can impair your sight,
Then like a wasp will sting.
Love at first sight ? I'm not so sure,
Approach on tippy toes,
Flirtatious eyes might be a lure,
To tears and lifelong woes.
Some love is destined not to last,
And fails the test of time,
Like actors in a play miscast,
Or verse devoid of rhyme.
This poem is written half in jest,
And half in searing pain,
But every word I can attest,
Is penned not in disdain.
For me .. in lovelife I was stung,
My heart it bore the cost,
And there at love's cold graveside flung,
A red rose white with frost.
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Posted: Apr 2021
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The pain of love....
Comments (21)
Rob
Kathy
Verses of broken heart are almost palpable in your poem.
Very artistic creation of pure heartache and sincere notions.
Frosty flower in the end represents frozen kingdom of loss within you.
First association in my head when I read poem was the song by Seal "Kiss from the rose".
Love downfalls are scattered in the vastness of immense affliction and longing.
Lovely poem made of utter pain...
Kind greetings!
Thank you for sharing such a touching heartfelt poem.. beautifully penned!
"And there at love's cold graveside flung,
A red rose white with frost."
Rob, Kathy, Ocean, Southmiami, Lily,
AutumnChild & Lacey.
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Kind regards Mick.
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Thanks for commenting.
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Thanks for sharing
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