A Lovers Lament..

The pain of love.. what can I write,
To warn about this 'thing',
Its beauty can impair your sight,
Then like a wasp will sting.

Love at first sight ? I'm not so sure,
Approach on tippy toes,
Flirtatious eyes might be a lure,
To tears and lifelong woes.

Some love is destined not to last,
And fails the test of time,
Like actors in a play miscast,
Or verse devoid of rhyme.

This poem is written half in jest,
And half in searing pain,
But every word I can attest,
Is penned not in disdain.

For me .. in lovelife I was stung,
My heart it bore the cost,
And there at love's cold graveside flung,
A red rose white with frost.
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Posted: Apr 2021
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The pain of love....

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Comments (21)

trurorob
good ballad on love and lose Mick
Rob
godsprincessonline today!
Very painful indeed and some fresher then others. Why does love have to be so complicated. Thanks for sharing Mick! hug

Kathy teddybear
Oceanzest
great last quatrain Mick applause
southmiami4321online today!
Few know what being in love is, this poem is deep. Love gives us pain yet we welcome it . Experience tells us to go slow and only time proves the stay. Love has its goodness but sometimes we end broken hearted. Enjoyed the rhyming Mizzy . Thanks for sharing SM heart wings
salamunaonline today!
Hi Mick! what a wonderful poem! also a good rhyming . And yes ..true, a lot of pain.. many thanks for sharing your feelings with us. Lily hug
AutumnChild
Mick, hello once again!

Verses of broken heart are almost palpable in your poem.
Very artistic creation of pure heartache and sincere notions.
Frosty flower in the end represents frozen kingdom of loss within you.
First association in my head when I read poem was the song by Seal "Kiss from the rose".
Love downfalls are scattered in the vastness of immense affliction and longing.

Lovely poem made of utter pain...

Kind greetings!
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LaceyQueen21
Dear Mick hug
Thank you for sharing such a touching heartfelt poem.. beautifully penned!
"And there at love's cold graveside flung,
A red rose white with frost."
bouquet purple heart
Mizzy4
Thanks so much....
Rob, Kathy, Ocean, Southmiami, Lily,
AutumnChild & Lacey.
Your feedback is very much appreciated.

Kind regards Mick.

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mcradloff
I remember my first love, like they said in the movie The Wedding Singer, "They'll take your heart and rip it out of your a**."doh
Mizzy4
I appreciate your comments Mcradloff,

Regards Mick.

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pisa_b
The poesy has a rhythm with ABAB form. In short, the poem depicts various aspects of love. At last, it seems, the poet himself is discontented with mundane love.
Mizzy4
Thank you for reading and commenting
Pisa_b.

Regards Mick.

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SUNNYfjkdj
Everyone has different opinions on lovelaugh laugh
Mizzy4
Very true SUNNYfjkdj,

Thanks for commenting.

Regards Mick.

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AutumnChild
Dear Mick,

I wanted to send you a message on your profile page.
But, message cannot be send.
Reason is very simple.
It is related to writing of course.
Everything spinns about lovely English within my immeasurable depths of mind.
Details I will not reveal here.
That is all.

Take care my poet's friend! bouquet
yaspark
The pains of love felt here, nice write Mick, thank you!wave
Mizzy4
Hi Yaspark,

Your visits are always appreciated.

Regards Mick.

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lilygold76
heart wings teddybear
Mizzy4
Thank you Lilygold,

Regards Mick,

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DK1001
A nice piece mizzy4. The balance of giving and receiving is a remedy of reward and relegation. That we can learn from our mistakes redeems the recollection as we move forward.

Thanks for sharing handshake
Mizzy4
Appreciated DK,

Regards Mick

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