Haiku challenge

Trying on a mask
A familiar stranger
Stares back at me

A squeaking sound
My shoes travel where they want
Get to follow them

Eruption in space
Into a new dimension
The wave of love spreads
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
Just trying..

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southmiami4321online today!
Very nice yaspak. Thoughts neatly matched here. Enjoyed. SMwave
trurorob
Nicely done, like them all, especially the first
Rob
salamuna
loved all of them ,Yanka. let your shoes travel where they want heart wings
Mizzy4
Each one different...
All very good !
Well done Yaspark.

Regards Mick

wine
Nuwahri61
Cool write Yaspark …… really cool …..regards Nu grin
yaspark
Thank you SM, good to hear from you!wave
yaspark
Rob, glad you liked them and I guessed right the first one would be your favourite. Hope to read something new&wonderful from you.Happy Fathers Day!wave
yaspark
Never getting tired of following my shoes Lilly, good to hear from you!handshake
yaspark
Always encouraging to hear from you Mick, added a new one, thank you!wave
yaspark
By, cool to hear “cool” from you, thank you!wave
EXRED3
wave love them all teddybear
yaspark
Nu - so sorry, spellchecker did another trick on me subbing “Nu” for “By”. Cool to hear “cool” from you, feels good.wave
yaspark
Thank you Red, glad you’re back!applause handshake :
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