Pearls from the Ocean Butterflies are from Heaven Diamonds come to light
Spring flower colors Winter snow with freezing winds Summer warm breezes
Family and home Getting together again Darkness has lifted
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
Correction: Didn't realize that only 3 lines in each stanza - duh!! Attempt at Haiku but afraid not a very good one. Not really my kind of poem. Happy Father's Day tomorrow to all the Father's out there. Kathy
Hi Kathy, you did your best. I love reading haiku, even i am not good in writing it..you should try more . You are wise and warm person. You will succeed .Lily
Thanks for the encouragement everyone - in looking at all your Haikus (is there an "s" on a plural Haiku?) I noticed I had too many lines in each stanza or whatever you call them! So took a line out on each group! Hope it improved it.
Kathy
OceanzestHamilton, Waikato New ZealandJun 25, 2021
Comments (10)
So many on here don't even try in these challenges.
Very imaginative.
Regards Mick.
Kathy
Kathy