Haiku Challenge attempt(?)

Pearls from the Ocean
Butterflies are from Heaven
Diamonds come to light

Spring flower colors
Winter snow with freezing winds
Summer warm breezes


Family and home
Getting together again
Darkness has lifted

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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
Correction: Didn't realize that only 3 lines in each stanza - duh!! Attempt at Haiku but afraid not a very good one. Not really my kind of poem. Happy Father's Day tomorrow to all the Father's out there.
Kathy

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salamuna
Hi Kathy, you did your best. I love reading haiku, even i am not good in writing it..you should try more . You are wise and warm person. You will succeed .Lily hug
Mizzy4
Well done Kathy....
So many on here don't even try in these challenges.
Very imaginative.

Regards Mick.

peace
Oceanzest
Yep first one had merit Kathy thumbs up
yaspark
Kathy - good to get out of our boxes sometimes!wave
EXRED3
Loved them i do love Haiku poetry
salamuna
very good now Kathy. "Diamonds come to light " Lily teddybear
southmiami4321online today!
Good start here GP. Love the ones you wrote. SMwave
godsprincessonline today!
Thanks for the encouragement everyone - in looking at all your Haikus (is there an "s" on a plural Haiku?) I noticed I had too many lines in each stanza or whatever you call them! banana So took a line out on each group! Hope it improved it.

Kathy dunno
Oceanzest
yeah figure Haiku is singular and plural huh
godsprincessonline today!
Thanks Ocean - wasn't sure.

Kathy
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