Ocean’s haiku challenge-2

Lifted by a breeze
Dreams transform into clouds
Sparkling drops return

No air left to breathe
Flowing sky following you
Vacuum for me

Locked in the closet
The skeleton felt confined
Those dirty secrets

The night was dragging
Nightmares kept coming back
Rooster did not care
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Posted: Jun 2021
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Another try..

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salamuna
Yanka, i definitely loved it.. dont be sad "Rooster did not care" wine
southmiami4321online today!
Very well planted these thoughts yaspark had me thinking. Enjoyed them all. SM
Mizzy4
First one my favourite... but all really good. Well done Yas !

Regards Mick

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Nuwahri61
Nailed them Yas …. Good to read …. Regards Nu grin
Oceanzest
Give you an A for those ones yaspark! handshake
yaspark
Thank you Lilly for helping me to stay afloat. Good thing we can always count on roosters to wake up. doh cheers
yaspark
Good to hear from you SM!handshake
Glad you enjoyed my scribblings, got inspired by all you guys.
yaspark
Mick, had to push myself a bit to write those.
Good to know you liked them.handshake
yaspark
Nu, maybe since haiku is short there is not enough space for imperfections. Glad you liked them anyway.handshake
yaspark
Thanks for the challenge and inspiration Ocean!
handshake where do we go next?confused
mcradloff
The worst nightmare I ever had was when I was three or four. I was in Hell and it was so dark that I couldn't see anything, only the crying of millions of lost souls and a feeling that I was never going to get to leave this horrible place.daydream devil
yaspark
Thank you McR, being in hell at night by yourself when you’re three or four is surely an unforgettable experience, good thing we have roosters to wake us up!??
yaspark
Thank you McR, being in hell at night by yourself when you’re three or four is surely an unforgettable experience, good thing we have roosters to wake us up!wave
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