Music Haiku

walking in Salzburg
Wolfgang Amadè Mozart
distant violin

an old piano
broken keys and tangled wire
good wine, sweet music
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Posted: Jul 2021
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Music Haiku

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godsprincessonline today!
Nice one Ocean. I'm confused - everything I read says that the Haiku is written with 5 moras (syllables) in the first and 3rd line and 7 in the 2nd line. I corrected mine because of that but I notice others haven't so is the 5 - 7 - 5 rhythm not right?

Kathy
Oceanzest
thank you for your comments SM, to be fair I'm more a Chopin guy than Mozart, I need more education in that area :)

Hi Kathy, I only interpret what I see on the internet which is yes 3 lines, 5 syllables first, 7, 5 but I think people have departed from that as the effect is the most important. I try to keep it to 5,7,5 as it provides an enjoyable challenge.

wine
Mizzy4
Enjoyable Haiku Ocean,
Thoughtful dedication.

Regards Mick.

cheers
mcradloff
I have a song by Falco called Amadeus, it hit number one on May 10, 1986.head banger
yaspark
Felt for that old piano Ocean, a good one!wave
salamuna
Enjoyed this one Ocean. Nice assosiatian of Salzburg...Mozart ..old piano..Lily
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