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A new design

I've redesigned, I looked at the plans, they
didn't fit with my demands,,

I've knocked down the walls and diverted
the halls,

I've demolished the floors and removed
all the doors,

I'm now on one level and its open plan,
I've done what I can,

I've cleared all the mess and removed excess
now airy and bright,,,a perfect marraige,

I'd really like to invite you in,, but I'd need
assurance as to where you've been,

I'm afraid I'll have to vet,,no visitors allowed
just yet,

There's work still in progress,,,with access
and egress,

But come back later when the workmen
are gone, dont be impaitent,,wont be long,

Then we'll have tea for two,,,
just me and just you.
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Posted: May 2010

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this is great - bags i do the snag list - though i'm not sure you know what that is, i love the poem ..applause applause
a little dusty around here with all your constructin' ... can ya keep the noise down too! Though I must admit, I can't wait to see the new digs. great write big O.
Ooooo fussy arn't we?? rolling on the floor laughing teddybear
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